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ahaw9913 ([info]ahaw9913) wrote in [info]qaf_prompts,
@ 2009-09-14 13:30:00

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Current mood: giggly
Entry tags:author: ahaw9913, fic, prompt: moving

Moving Challenge Ficlet!
Title: Britin Regained
Prompt: Moving
Author's Note: This is a follow-up to Britin Lost written for the Rain Prompt in [info]qaf_drabbles. A huge debt of gratitute goes to my superfantabulous beta, [info]suze_y.


Brian's lip curls as he wipes soot off the old black duffle Justin had set on the pool lounger. "With everything that was destroyed, I can't believe this thing survived the fire. Figures."

Justin shoves the art box Melanie and Lindsay had given him inside the duffle, shaking his head as the weight of sadness and disbelief presses on him. The box is smeared with ash and was a little burned, but it’s intact. “I can’t believe I'm moving into this bag again. I swore New York'd be the last time.” Justin's resigned sigh echoes in the morning quiet.

"Justin, it's going to be okay."

Justin rounds on Brian. "How is it going to be okay? Our home, our stuff, it's all gone. This is all we have left." A puff of soot floats into the air as the duffle is shaken and tossed back down onto the lounger. A slightly panicked tone seeps into Justin’s voice as it rises. "How can it be okay, Brian? Britin is gone." The last harsh note holds a tinge of anguish.

Brian tips his head back, his “oh-so-put-upon” voice a sharp contrast to Justin's lingering pain. "Jesus. And everyone thinks I’m a drama queen." Brian's voice is now as serious as his face. "Justin, listen to me. Are you listening?" Still caught up in a maelstrom of emotions, Justin can only nod. "This bag…” Brian shakes the duffle this time, “…is not all we have left. Britin. Is. Not. Gone." As Justin's eyebrows lift and he looks around meaningfully at the piles of burned timber and ash, Brian raises his own brow and pointedly looks down at his hands. Justin's gaze follows as Brian gathers the empty rosewood ring box and the picture Justin had drawn of him and adds them to Justin's charred art box inside the old black duffle. Just a touch of whimsy colors Brian’s voice. "It’s just downsized for a while." A breath he didn't realize he was holding escapes Justin as Brian's meaning hits him.

Lifting the bag to his shoulder, Brian reaches out and flattens his hand on the side of Justin's face. As Justin leans into the caress, Brian’s fingers curl around the back of his head and he draws Justin in for a kiss. When Justin finally begins to soften into the kiss, Brian pulls back and stares into his eyes. Justin wonders what he is looking for, unaware that the strength and resiliency that always amazes Brian has come back into his eyes. Brian seems satisfied. "Come on, your mom’s waiting for us."

Justin takes one more quick look around, and realizes the crushing pain he’d felt just minutes earlier has lightened. His shoulder nudges Brian’s as they turn and move toward the waiting taxi. "You know, Deb says Michael's old room is still available..."



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[info]the_minx_17
2009-09-14 07:03 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for fixing it and, heh, this "You know, Deb says Michael's old room is still available..." is love.

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 02:17 am UTC (link)
You are welcome, and Thank YOU!!!

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[info]jule1122
2009-09-14 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Seriously, one of the best last lines ever! And yay for the empty box.

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 02:14 am UTC (link)
And yay for the empty box.

I did wonder if anyone would catch that! :D And I'm with you, Yay!

Thank you, Jule! I appreciate you reading so much!

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[info]_alicesprings
2009-09-15 12:26 am UTC (link)
Oh. My. Heart!

I LOVE this!! So fabulous, so many subtle, beautiful details. I love the empty ring box *swoon*

Thank you for writing!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 02:20 am UTC (link)
Oh, I am so glad you like it!

The ring box is like a special little hidden prize, if you find it! Hee!

And thank YOU for posting the challenge!

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[info]simplystars
2009-09-15 02:39 am UTC (link)
Just downsizing... until they can rebuild bigger and better! And the line about Mikey's old room made me LOL. :D

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 02:49 am UTC (link)
Bigger and better is the only way Mr. Kinney does business! :D

Thank you for reading!

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[info]suze_y
2009-09-15 12:01 pm UTC (link)
You know, in fine detail, how I feel about this. But I'll record it here for posterity anyhow.

I love it. :)

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 09:21 pm UTC (link)
♥

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[info]michira_70
2009-09-15 06:12 pm UTC (link)
Some very good lines in there. Full of love.
downsized/ringbox/Michael's old room

I really like it :)

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 09:22 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, Michi!

I am so glad you like it!

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[info]etextraordinary
2009-09-15 07:05 pm UTC (link)
The black duffel survived, it would probably survive a nuclear holocaust; which makes me sad. But the empty rosewood ring box survived too! Its subtle and powerful, so full of teh love!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-15 09:19 pm UTC (link)
Those two items are so iconic, well the one is not exactly canon, that they are like stories in and of themselves, no?

Thank you, Darling!

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[info]sjmpets
2009-09-21 11:00 pm UTC (link)
the empty ring box speaks volumes. britin is not lost as long as they're together. as they say, home is where the heart is,and it's wherever they are.
this was beautiful.

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-09-22 04:29 am UTC (link)
You're right, Britin can never be lost!

I am so glad you enjoyed this!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-09-27 07:21 pm UTC (link)
This is just so sweet!!! I'm so glad you gave us a follow up to let us know that everything will be ok :)

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