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Britin (_alicesprings) wrote in qaf_challenges,
@ 2010-06-13 19:02:00

THE UNEXPECTED
Title: The Unexpected
Written By:

ahaw9913
Graphic Title: Swept Along
Artist:

maxymama
Timeline: Post 513
Author's Notes: Thanks to my beta. The ficlet was inspired by the graphic. Neither the ficlet, nor the graphic are suitable to be viewed at work, or by anyone who is not an adult.

You'd expected hot.

You'd expected wet.

You'd expected tight.

You'd expected to love everything about the feel of your cock sliding into him like this...nothing to dull the sensation. Who wouldn't?

Fuck, you’d even expected it to tear down any remaining walls you’d kept erected against him. Against the tendency he had to reach into your soul, find all the carefully hidden pieces, and take them for his own.

You'd expected all of these things. You'd planned for them. You'd done what you could to prepare yourself to accept them.

What you hadn't expected, hadn't planned for, and sure as fuck hadn't been prepared for, was the impact that Justin's experience would have on you.

As he absorbed the impact of hotter, wetter, thicker, you hadn't expected the shuddering and writhing of his body to render words like control and stamina meaningless.

You hadn't expected his moans and keening to drive you to mark every inch of his skin as a record of his pleasure.

And you never, ever could have expected that seeing the tracks of his silent tears as he collapsed in your arms, physically and emotionally wrecked, would make you regret that it had taken you so long to want this.

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	notreallyme10 2010-06-13 02:05 pm UTC (link)
	As he absorbed the impact of hotter, wetter, thicker, you hadn't expected the shuddering and writhing of his body to render words like control and stamina meaningless. Great line! Brian could never prepare himself for Justin :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	fun_demented 2010-06-13 04:55 pm UTC (link)
	Oh! Hee. I had thought this was written by you. Okay, I have another couple guesses. Can't wait to see. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:11 am UTC (link)
	You know, I don't think my writing has ever been given a higher compliment!!! Thank you!! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

fun_demented
2010-06-19 09:49 pm UTC (link)

Well, you were actually my next choice I SWEAR. But you don't always write sex and I didn't want to assign it to you in case it would make you blush. LOL.

This was incredibly good. And yes, it was a high compliment, b/c when I think brilliant, meaningful, IC, storyfilled one-shot, sex fic, I think notreallyme.

I will have to add YOU to that thought now. Exquisite, my dear. Truly.

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	fun_demented 2010-06-19 09:50 pm UTC (link)
	P.S. the reason you were my next choice was b/c of how well and precisely the writing was crafted. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:06 am UTC (link)
	Thank you, Darling!! You know it is a special thrill for me when you like something I have written!! {{{Hugs}}} (Reply to this) (Parent)

	noteverything 2010-06-13 02:51 pm UTC (link)
	Hot, hot, hot!! Thanks for sharing something that's really much more than porn. Very well-done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:09 am UTC (link)
	Thank you!!! And also for beta-ing for me!! Glad I can convey what I believe to be so true: Brian and Justin being together, in whatever way, is always so much more than porn! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fun_demented 2010-06-13 04:52 pm UTC (link)
	Oh. Geezus. Yes. Yes. This. Now, this is the stuff that QAF is made of. Thank you, thank you thank you. Beautiful, sexy, hot, and moving. My hormones are all over the place. Memories as soon as authors are revealed, although I have suspicion of who you are. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:14 am UTC (link)
	Honestly, you didn't guess me, did you??? teases Your comments have made my week! I couldn't wait to be able to respond and tell you how tickled I am that you liked this so much!! Maxy's graphic is so beautiful, and I really wanted to do it justice!! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	fun_demented 2010-06-19 09:53 pm UTC (link)
	You were my second guess, b/c I knew without a doubt which one Xie wrote and since notreallyme commented I figured it wasn't her. When the list of authors came out, I saw you on there and figured it was yours. Seriously. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	butternutsquash 2010-06-14 01:07 am UTC (link)
	This is really awesome. I like how Brian is completely unprepared for the reality of raw sex and that when it's over he wishes he'd done it sooner. That latter notion is so like life, but we can't really rush getting ready for [whatever it is we just experienced]. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:18 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much for your lovely comment and for your gorgeous graphic!!! I had a great time working with you on this combo entry, and would love to do something like this again!! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	rosy5000 2010-06-14 04:22 pm UTC (link)
	WOW!! The emotion packed into this is just breath-taking! And so very hot!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:21 am UTC (link)
	Hee!!! Thank you so much!!! I'm tickled you liked our take on this milestone in their lives. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sjmpets 2010-06-15 02:48 am UTC (link)
	with justin, always expect the unexpected. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:22 am UTC (link)
	That is so true! And a lesson that Brian continues to learn!!! Thank you so much, and glad you enjoyed!! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	suze_y 2010-06-17 12:21 pm UTC (link)
	OMG!!! What a gorgeous picture you've drawn here. Unforgettable! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	ahaw9913 2010-06-19 04:26 am UTC (link)
	So pleased you liked it! smackles you silly I knew you would know I wrote it!! Maxy's graphic was very inspirational!!! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	bridgetmkennitt 2010-08-20 01:46 am UTC (link)
	Love! <3 (Reply to this)