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The Porn Santa (smutmas_mod) wrote in merry_smutmas,
@ 2007-12-03 00:00:00

Entry tags:

fic, harry/draco

Merry Smutmas, Elucreh!

To: elucreh
From: sansa1970

Title: Draco, the Magic Dragon
Rating: NC17
Pairing: HP/DM
Disclaimer: Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, and all associated characters from the Harry Potter universe are the property of J.K. Rowling and those to whom she has licensed her creations, including without limitation Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books, Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Come to the fair! Draco's granting wishes, Harry's investigating a mystery, and Luna's giving away pants. Crystal balls and kissing, dirty talk and candy floss – and that's just the beginning.
A/N: Merry Smutmas, Elucreh! I had a wonderful time being your Secret Santa, and I hope you enjoy your gift. Endless thanks to my betas – you made this story ten times better. This fic is canon compliant through DH (except the epilogue).

( Draco, the Magic Dragon )

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	chiralove 2007-12-03 05:50 am UTC (link)
	OMG, this was just fabulous beyond words! Wow! All of the characters, the backstory, the relationship between Harry and Draco, just wow, and the Magic Dragon was just priceless! This story is just so amazing! :D (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 09:09 pm UTC

rickey_a
2007-12-03 06:08 am UTC (link)

I absolutely loved this. I'm a sucker for down-on-his-luck!Draco. Great tale. I loved how Draco and Harry were so obviously attracted and knew the other was as well but still couldn't accept and didn't know how to proceed. I ached for them to work it out. Very moving and romantic.
"I want to kiss you." le sigh
Luna = love. "Standard hypnosis, with a small nonverbal spell thrown in. I've been perfecting it on my cats."
LOL
so much to love

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2007-12-04 12:20 am UTC

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 09:11 pm UTC

bewarethesmirk
2007-12-03 07:05 am UTC (link)

I loved this. This was such an entertaining piece. I loved the snark, of course. I appreciate the mystery as well, that there was something driving the story forward. The gradual unraveling of the plot was a masterful way to hold the readers' attention.

Also want to add that I love your Harry. He's more teasing sexually than other versions I've read, and I like it muchly. :D

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sansa1970, 2008-01-05 09:12 pm UTC

r_grayjoy
2007-12-03 07:15 am UTC (link)

Oh, this is fantastic. The perfect combination of hilarious, plotty, and hot, with an ending that manages to be sweet without being saccharine.

Draco really does have the appropriate sense of dramatics for this line of work, I must say. And it would take some humbling circumstances to turn him into a better sort of person. His POV here is great; he's lost a lot of his egotism, but he's still proud and sarcastic, and has gained a bit of perseverance out of necessity.

The wand from Wicca Weekly made me giggle madly, as did the Luna cameos. Luna's great -- older, a bit more together, but still very much Luna at the core. I really liked Marguerite, also; you put an extraordinary amount of presence into a character who's only on screen for a very short amount of time.

Dirty-talking Draco; gnnnuh. And the rushed sex scene, with the customer just on the other side of the tent wall -- abjkefuh! I was absolutely on the edge of my seat with the tension through that scene. Awesome.

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sansa1970, 2008-01-05 09:15 pm UTC

	atdelphi 2007-12-03 07:24 am UTC (link)
	Oh wow - fantastic, and wonderfully (and sharply) written! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 09:13 pm UTC

	simons_flower 2007-12-03 08:21 am UTC (link)
	Very nice! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:37 pm UTC

	svartalfur 2007-12-03 12:43 pm UTC (link)
	An absolute delight. Wonderfully written, full of humour. Your Magic Dragon is truly magic. Thank you for sharing! (Reply to this) (Thread)

(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2007-12-04 12:21 am UTC

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:38 pm UTC

dark0feenix
2007-12-03 12:43 pm UTC (link)

I really loved the sense of a whole new world when reading this. It doesn't happen often but sometimes you come across fics where you feel like you've never read anything like it before. Draco as a magician for Muggles was such a treat. He really fit in the part. Luna was her wonderful self and Harry the perfect 'equal' to Draco. Nicely humorous dialogue and lovely combination of eagerly clumsy/passionate sex. ;)

His next thoughts, when he finally regained consciousness, were that he was freezing cold, and also that Potter's gorgeous eyes still stole his breath.
"Don't move," Potter said. "I think you cracked a few ribs."
Maybe not the eyes after all, then.
"Ugh," Draco said, and Potter nodded.
"I know. I was watching."

"Standard hypnosis, with a small nonverbal spell thrown in. I've been perfecting it on my cats."
Draco pretended he hadn't heard that last part.
:D

Thank you!

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sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:40 pm UTC

	dora_the_nymph 2007-12-03 12:46 pm UTC (link)
	Oh I really like this. You capture the fair so well and weave to plot in with the Harry/Draco beautifully. And I love your Luna, she is wonderful! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:39 pm UTC

empathic_siren
2007-12-03 01:04 pm UTC (link)

Delightful. Absolutely delightful. I loved Draco's running commentary and his thoughts on his clients. The humor and snarkiness was a poignant underpinning to just how *awful* Draco's life was/is. The contrast here was subtle and worked very well because of it. And Harry! I love Harry--indecisive yet decisive Harry is perfection. Fantastic job! I really, really enjoyed this.

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sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:42 pm UTC

	hambares 2007-12-03 02:05 pm UTC (link)
	Really enjoyable! I especially liked how you didn't fix everything in the end, but there is a lot of hope that it will turn out alright! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:44 pm UTC

	josan 2007-12-03 02:10 pm UTC (link)
	Sweet, wet, perfection. Potter had talent. OMG! He's not the only one. The Magic Dragon? What a hoot! I love this Draco, sadder but wiser. You had me in tears over him. (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:45 pm UTC

	aviss 2007-12-03 02:56 pm UTC (link)
	Oh that was lovely, and funny, and witty and... there are too many things about this I love to count them now! It just made my day, which was being fairly crappy! thanks! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:46 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-03 03:50 pm UTC (link)
	Oh wonderful ♥ absolutely lovely. kept me on the edge of my seat and now i am officially going to be late to class but who cares because imma go with a warm fuzzy feeling and a stupid grin on my face =) (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:50 pm UTC

	witchdragon 2007-12-03 04:43 pm UTC (link)
	Such a wonderful story- so interesting and unique with a great twist and hot sex! Yay! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:51 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2007-12-03 04:46 pm UTC (link)

Oh, how utterly and completely fabulous! Draco snarking, and steamy kissing, and Luna as airy and confusing and logical as ever (did I list that I love Luna? Or are you psychic? I know I didn't list Luna match-making, so you must be!)

The plot was absolutely amazing, Draco's bitterness in exactly the right proportions, and Harry's thoughtlessness so very IC.

I loved the exploding...not-potion. And I love that Harry laughed at it.

I loved all the little hints at their history together, brandy-laced tea and pranks on Percy. You managed to completely convince me of the rightness of them without overdoing the schmoop so that it unbalanced the tone of the fic. Well done!

They'll immortalize it in a song. *dies laughing*

Harry being a princess about his bedclothes made me grin.

I adore and am intrigued by Marguerite. And I am so glad that Lucius didn't abandon Draco!

LOL, she's been perfecting it on her cats. Oh, your Luna is perfection.

Oh, just lovely all over. Hot and sweet and strong and....mmmm. Thank you so, so, so much!

--Love, Elucreh

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(no subject) - (Anonymous), 2007-12-03 08:06 pm UTC

	mijan 2007-12-03 05:06 pm UTC (link)
	Hmm... very different! I like that. And, strangely, Luna was my favourite part of the entire story. I love how you have her switching conversation topics so fast that Draco's head was spinning. Lots of fun little details in the story. Thanks for the read! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:51 pm UTC

kennahijja
2007-12-03 06:38 pm UTC (link)

Loved it! The carnival atmosphere is so great, and the mixed fun and bitterness of Draco ending up there without magic and harrassed by the
wizarding 'authorities' worked extremely well.

The H/D was wonderful, hot and with real emotional depth (even though
Draco tries not to let it show). And plot! Really good plot too :).

The ending, tentative and uncertain as it was, made me very, very happy. To see them trying fits the story much better than a perfect happy resolution would have.

And I've had 'Puff, the Magic Dragon' running through my head all
day now... ;)

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sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:56 pm UTC

	maabandmorgana 2007-12-03 07:00 pm UTC (link)
	I just adored this! I love Luna, and glad Hobbs got what he deserved. The back story was good as well! Well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:53 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2007-12-03 07:01 pm UTC (link)
	this was so enjoyable! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:51 pm UTC

	fourth_rose 2007-12-03 07:31 pm UTC (link)
	I loved this story. You did a great job with both Draco's and Harry's characterisation, and the setting works perfectly. I could almost see Draco sneer inwardly at his idiotic Muggle customers ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 10:52 pm UTC

	shiny_crystal 2007-12-03 07:58 pm UTC (link)
	Wonderful! I have such a weakness for Draco working among Muggles. I really liked his voice in this. Well done on both his and Harry's characterization! What a lovely, plotty fic, with perfectly balanced elements of hilarity and more serious parts. Luna was fantastic, too. Very enjoyable fic :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-06 01:31 pm UTC

	tiger_iris 2007-12-03 08:23 pm UTC (link)
	That was very good. I loved the almost surreal atmosphere, the hilarious situations with the Muggle clients, and all those little touches you added: the Magic dragon, Luna at her best, the puzzling figure of Marguerite...Well done! (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-06 01:31 pm UTC

silverhielm
2007-12-03 09:25 pm UTC (link)

What a lovely, delightful story. It's not easy to find stories that are this pleasant to read. I actually didn't want to leave my room, especially after reading the hottest flirting scene I've met in months. UST is one of my major kinks, and it worked perfectly without the need of a long backstory. Besides, your Draco is insanely adorable, and you wrote a great Luna too. She was perfect, the right balance of crazy, thoughtful and bright ♥
The plot worked very well and it was useful but unobtrusive. Thank you for sharing this beautiful fanfic, I can't wait to find out who you are!

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sansa1970, 2008-01-06 01:34 pm UTC

	waterbird 2007-12-03 09:58 pm UTC (link)
	This was wonderful! The setting was creative and new, and I loved the hints of Harry and Draco's past together. And Luna was wonderful -- excellent headache cure. (Reply to this) (Thread)

sansa1970, 2008-01-05 11:00 pm UTC

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