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wanking_mods ([info]wanking_mods) wrote in [info]hp_wankfest,
@ 2011-05-02 08:57:00

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Entry tags:2011 fic

Wankfest Fic: Tom Riddle in the Chamber of Secrets with a Time-Turner
Title: With Malice Aforethought
Author: [info]leela_cat
Character: Tom Riddle/Lord Voldemort
Location: Chamber of Secrets
Prop: Time-Turner
Other Characters: N/A
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Word Count: ~950
Disclaimer: Hers, not mine — the characters, the world, and the money — more's the pity.
Author's Notes: Thanks to my lovely beta who didn't seem to mind that there's a first time for everything.



There was a long, dreadful, piercing scream. Ink spurted out of the diary in torrents, streaming over Harry's hands, flooding the floor. Riddle was writhing and twisting, screaming and flailing and then ...
He had gone.
— Chamber of Secrets



Tom Riddle is used to waiting. Being woken up every time someone opened up that damned diary had helped him to hold onto and expand the small store of self-restraint that Lord Voldemort had discarded decades earlier. However, none of that hard-won patience makes the days and months pass any faster.

Reviewing the Pensieve memory of his "final" exit from the world was only entertaining for the first hundred or so times. Poor little Harry Potter, so sure he'd defeated the dread Lord Voldemort that he hadn't so much as considered whether basilisk venom could destroy a Horcrux. Hadn't that self-righteous prig of a headmaster taught him anything?

Death to create a Horcrux. Death to bring a soul-splinter to life if the original no longer lived when the Horcrux was split open. And a basilisk slain by an innocent was as good a death as any other.

Just thinking about it makes Tom laugh again. His laughter echoes off the walls and fills the Chamber of Secrets. His amusement dies all too soon, though, and he returns to kicking his heels against Slytherin's forehead. Merlin's balls, but he's bored. If he'd known he'd end up stuck in this hellhole, he would have created himself another Horcrux to wait in. But he didn't and he hadn't. So he has a human body and human appetites and nowhere to fucking go.

A whisper of pain slices through him, and he clenches his jaw against it. Bloody Voldemort's at it again, trying to bring himself back to life. Bastard hasn't so much as checked to see whether another soul-splinter succeeded in his absence. Oh no. Voldemort's too fucking self-absorbed to give a damn about anyone but himself.

Growling with fury, Tom throws Incendio at the remains of the basilisk carcass. The flames bounce off, merely charring a small portion of the skin. He raises the wand he found in one of the smaller rooms off the main chamber, aiming more carefully. This time the curse hits the desiccated left eye, and it bursts into flames.

The pain eases, and he lies back. Stretching out on top of Slytherin's head, his lower legs dangling, he stares at the ceiling. No spell can solve his dilemma. Time and date can only tell him what he already knows. No matter when the Voldemort soul-splinter was created, it's kill or be killed, because neither of them will consider sharing this world.

He reaches into his pocket and pulls out the old-fashioned Time-Turner he discovered inside a book that morning, dangling it by its chain and causing it to swing above him. Light glints off the glass and silver. The time-sand in the bottom glitters.

He lowers the Time-Turner, brushing it over his lips, and arousal slams through him. Limitless possibilities, innumerable worlds of past and future hang from the fingertips of his right hand, and Tom craves every single one of them. Desperately, viciously, and with malice aforethought.

A quick spell undoes the buttons on his robes, his shirt, and his trousers. He parts his lips, presses the tip of his tongue against the Time-Turner, and groans. The magic is right there, metallic and salty, taunting and teasing him with so many promises.

Tucking his wand into its sheath, he reaches down with his left hand, shoves his pants down, frees his cock, and rubs his thumb over the head. He sucks on the Time-Turner, drawing it into his mouth and releasing it, matching the rhythm to the rough tugging and squeezing on his cock. His hips rise, and he braces his feet against Slytherin's head, but it's not enough. It's never enough.

He needs magic. He always needs magic, has done since he learned what it can do, since he set a wardrobe on fire, since he hexed and cursed and killed with magic.

Releasing his cock, he grabs his wand. At his command, ribbons of green and silver pour from the tip of his wand and begin to slither over his body, wrapping around him. Power penetrates him, kisses and licks him, nips and shocks him.

Wand in one hand, Time-Turner in the other, he's stymied for a moment, but a flick of his wrist wraps the chain around his right hand. He takes hold of his cock and gives it a good stroke from base to head, twisting a little over the sensitive head as he usually does. On the down-stroke, the Time-Turner catches on his foreskin, bumps over the green ribbon that's winding its way up and down him.

Tom's skin prickles into goosebumps, and his hips jolt upwards into the feeling that's clawing up his spine. The Chamber of Secrets dissolves around him. He can no longer feel the stone beneath him. He's lying on power — his power, the Time-Turner's power, time's power. It's all around him. It belongs to him.

Scenes flash past him in a haze of colours and unidentifiable shapes. Back and forth through time as he pulls, squeezes, and thrusts, and the Time-Turner rubs against him. Sparks dance along his nerves, flash through his sight. Voices surround him, unintelligible, unrecognisable. He comes with a triumphant shout, striping the Time-Turner with his release. His semen jams it up, stops the spinning, and he lands flat on his back, sprawled out over stone.

He lays there for a moment, staring up into the darkness, regaining control of his breathing, and he smiles. Wherever he's landed, whenever he's landed, it's all his. He's the only Tom Riddle, the only Lord Voldemort, and there'll be no Harry Potter to stop him this time.


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[info]owlbait.livejournal.com
2011-05-03 01:39 am UTC (link)
Wow. It certainly seems right that Tom would be turned on by a powerful magical artifact. The idea that he's turning it over and over deliberately while wanking with it is hot and funny - and so, so wrong. Lovely.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:15 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. I'm glad this seemed so right (and so wrong) to you.

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[info]veridari
2011-05-03 04:20 am UTC (link)
That was sooooo deliciously creepy! Nicely done!

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:16 pm UTC (link)
*beams* Thank you very much. ♥

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[info]vividzephyr
2011-05-03 05:37 am UTC (link)
Oooh, very nicely done! I like that the horcrux in the diary actually became human after the diary was destroyed. The idea of him traveling to a time where there is no Lord Voldemort or Harry Potter to become yet another dark lord is really awesome. :)

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. I reread that section carefully, and it's not completely out of the realm of possibility. *evil grin*

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[info]torino10154
2011-05-03 12:01 pm UTC (link)
What an ending! Somehow I don't think that can end well for whomever does inhabit that time and place. I'm not at all surprised Tom would get off on Time. Perfect object for him. Well done.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:36 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. I'm sure there will be a few witches and wizards in that time or place who are willing to take advantage of what Tom has to offer.

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[info]kelly_chambliss
2011-05-03 07:58 pm UTC (link)
Very well-done -- Tom literally getting off on power. It's hot and nicely creepy, and what an ending. I'd love to see a sequel.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. Somehow I think power is Tom's ultimate aphrodisiac. As for a sequel, I'm not going to make any promises.

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[info]countesszero
2011-05-04 03:57 am UTC (link)
that was very interesting and hot! and i like that you used tom riddle from the chamber of secrets. i've always liked him, a pity he was never in another hp movie ...

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[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I like that Tom Riddle as well.

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[info]ragdoll
2011-05-04 09:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow, this was great. Definitely a different take on using the prompts and I loved every minute of it. Sex magic is a powerful thing so having Tom use it to change the world entirely was just inspired genius!

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. I really just could see Tom wanting to have his own world to conquer, you know? *evil grin*

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[info]keyairreem
2011-05-04 09:56 pm UTC (link)
Woah! Lovely yet so wrong! But poor Tom no Harry to play with! LOL

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:47 pm UTC (link)
I'm sure Tom will find *someone* to play with. Thank you!

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[info]alwaysasnapefan
2011-05-07 04:42 pm UTC (link)
I love him destroying his "pet" after its death in his anger and disappointment. And I love his loathing for his future self being an asshole cause it impedes on him. So selfish. :-3

The magic is right there, metallic and salty, taunting and teasing him with so many promises.
Love this, especially "the magic is right there". I understand it means right there like close, but when I first read I thought it meant like the magic is correct there. Either way, awesome.

And he braces his feet against Slytherin's head, but it's not enough. It's never enough.
I love all the symbolism in this fic.

I really think this is very sexy and very interesting. What a nice study of Tom Riddle's mind.


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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much for your lovely comment. I'm so glad that his selfishness and hunger came through so clearly.

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[info]eeyore9990
2011-05-11 06:00 am UTC (link)
Mmm, I love this fic. I love the glimpse into TR's mind soul. That he's getting off on power is fantastic, and I love the idea you've left us with, of TR being given a fresh start on his path to power. Excellent.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:54 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much - for everything. I'm so glad that you liked my experiment and encouraged me along Tom's path. ♥

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[info]alisanne
2011-05-21 12:48 am UTC (link)
Ooh, hot and oh so creepy. I can totally see TR doing this. *nods*
Very well done! :)

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:57 pm UTC (link)
*beams* Thank you. This Tom Riddle will make an interesting Dark Lord, I think, while avoiding the mistakes he's watched Voldemort making.

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[info]r_grayjoy
2011-05-26 06:41 am UTC (link)
This piece is completely fantastic. Incredibly inventive and definitely thought-provoking. (Raising the bar for Wankfest fics, eh? XD)

Your Tom here is brilliant. He is very much Tom in his earlier days before Lord Voldemort really made an appearance. Certainly far more subtle than his later counterpart, with his patience "improved" by his time trapped in the diary. His disgust with Voldemort's arrogance and inability to see beyond his own absent nose is perfect.

The fact that he's aroused by possibilities and potential for power fits so very well. but it's not enough. It's never enough. He needs magic. He always needs magic -- that, YES.

This is stark and cold while simultaneously being disturbingly hot. By the end it feels like we're caught up and spinning with Tom -- because of him. And the ending!! Gaaah, so many possibilities! It makes me really want to find out when and where he ended up, and whether he's truly capable of learning from his counterpart's mistakes.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 10:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I do think this Tom Riddle is capable of learning from Voldemort's mistakes. While, of course, making a series of his own. Thank you so much. ♥

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[info]nehalenia
2011-05-30 03:17 am UTC (link)
Someone above called this "deliciously creepy" and that's really a perfect description. The idea that his diary Horcrux could become that independent is a great take on canon. I loved him making comments about the original "Voldemort". His wanking was disturbingly hot, which is just how Tom Riddle wanking should be. I enjoyed reading this.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 11:01 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. Yes, Tom Riddle should definitely be disturbing and hot, and I'm glad you found him that way in this story.

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[info]luciusmistress
2011-06-01 11:39 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow! I really loved the glimpse into Tom's soul. Of course he could only get off on magic! And of course he couldn't share that power, share the world, with anyone, not even himself.

And the spinning through time while he wanks! So hot! So many possibilities! I'd love to know where he ended up and whether he can avoid the mistakes he made the first time around :)

This was an amazing read!

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much. And, yes, that's exactly what I was trying to show with Tom. :D

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[info]secretlypadfoot
2011-06-02 11:21 pm UTC (link)
Ooooh, how devious. And hot. Really, really hot.

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Re: With Malice Aforethought
[info]leela_cat
2011-06-26 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so very much.

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