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wanking_mods ([info]wanking_mods) wrote in [info]hp_wankfest,
@ 2008-05-07 12:00:00

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Viktor Krum on the Durmstrang Ship with Ice Mice
Title: Shot Across the Bows
Author: [info]nimrod_9
Character: Viktor Krum
Location: Durmstrang ship
Object: ice mice
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,375
Author's Notes: Thanks to multi-talented beta and brit picker - m

Viktor wasn't sleeping. He slipped from his bunk on the Durmstrang ship, and padded to a porthole. The breeze was cool, but it hadn't penetrated the interior of the ship yet. It had been a warm day by Scottish spring standards from what he was led to believe. It had felt much the same as the sometimes chilly spring on Bulgaria's Thracian Plain. The ship was definitely too warm and stuffy. He was restless; he turned back to his bunk and tossed his tunic on over his head. Perhaps he could find something soothing up on deck.

He strode across the deck toward the railing, the wood felt still slightly warm under his bare feet. The night was calm and clear; he imagined he could almost see the stars reflected in the lake. The lake was too calm; he missed the rolling of the waves. As he stared out at the castle, he knew the missing waves were not his real problem. The real problem was he needed a release, a sexual release.

Earlier, Hermione had invited him to study. The studying hadn't lasted very long. They'd spent the evening kissing, snogging as she would say. She'd writhed against him all night, but in the end she wouldn't go any further than the kisses. Of course, she was fifteen and really too young for anything else. She was a beautiful bud of a woman, inquisitive but still skittish, too. She had gasped and trembled as he touched her breast, a gasp seemingly more in alarm than pleasure. That, however, didn't prevent him from being aroused.

He glanced stealthily to the right then the left; no one was about. Quickly, he searched his pockets, no wand and no tissue. Damn. This was the perfect place, but he didn't have anything to clean up the evidence. He searched his pockets again. Maybe. No, it was a packet of ice mice that Hermione had given him. He stared at the water for a moment, and then paused. The railing wasn't too high; his cock could easily clear it. He'd toss off right into the lake. This would work!

His fingers flew to unfasten his tunic. Yes, this was exactly what he needed. The cool air hit his warm chest, and his nipples peaked. He gasped at the sensations, his cock snapping almost to full attention. First, he gave a quick tweak to one nipple, and then the other. It was not quite as an intense reaction as it had been when he'd first bared his chest. He looked around again. His cock fairly jumped out over the elastic of his pyjama bottoms. He settled the elastic up under his balls, enjoying the sensation of them being cupped close to his body. A reminder of how tightly they would soon be drawing up. He then ran his finger lightly over the length of his cock. Pausing to admire himself, he wrapped his hand around the swollen length; he wished he had a bit more length, but he was more than satisfied with his cock's impressive girth.

He twisted one of his nipples again, and was disappointed that he didn't see his cock react. The slightly chilly air, it had been so stimulating. Suddenly, it was as if a golden snitch appeared over his head. He had Hermione's ice mice -- they were cold. Fumbling in his pocket he pulled the box out and opened it. Perfect. He popped one into his palm, and laid the rest of the package down on the railing. With the ice between his fingers, he rubbed one nub with the small, chilly sweet. It peaked hard, and his cock jumped. He tried it again, with the same reaction followed by a low moan.

Two melted ice mice later, his chest and hands were wet and sticky and his cock was pointing more up than out. He popped the tiny mouse sweets into his mouth. They were slightly salty from his skin. Tentatively, he ran his cool hand over his cock. It wasn't too cold, and the sticky slipperiness left behind from the ice mice was perfect. He fisted his cock shoving the rock hard organ through his tightly closed hand. Now, he couldn't wait. He stroked his cock fast and furiously; he was desperate to come. But, after a few moments the melted treat had dried up. The friction became unpleasant.

Fortunately, he had more ice mice. This time he played until he'd melted four. The first, he sucked into his mouth before taking it in his fingers and alternately rubbing his nipples and collarbones until the ice was gone. The second he sucked on again, but this one he slid over his Adam's apple, down between his pectoral muscles, down the deep groove that bisected his torso, into the indentations running across his taut abdomen, to his navel where the sticky liquid was pooling. Then he finger-fucked his belly button like he would use his cock in any willing orifice. Sliding his hand further down, he stroked his cock twice, and let out a low rumbling groan before grabbing another sweet.

The third one he took into his hand, while he worried his lower lip with his teeth. Should he? Would any truly straight man think of this? He slid the sweet down the curve of his lower back to his firm rounded buttocks. After he took a deep breath, he slid the ice mice down his cleft. A violent shiver coursed through his body, and it wasn't just from the cold. He did it again. His cock bobbed insistently for more. The sweet was perfect against his pucker, stimulating him far more than he would have imagined. No wonder gay men loved to be touched there. He'd never seriously considered it, but what he'd already done had felt so incredible he was just going to have to take the next step and give it a try. Lifting his leg to rest on the low wall surrounding the deck he could grasp the rail with on hand, the other hand he took and pressed the tip of one finger into his opening. He gasped and stopped. Relax, just relax. The finger finally slipped in, he pulled it back gingerly and pushed back again. After a few strokes he tried adding a second finger. He was full, so full. Then he touched something inside that almost sent him over the edge and over the rail of the ship as well. Even with all his athletic prowess there was no way he could come standing on one foot. He pressed the spot again and cried out softly. His fingers slipped out, and he sighed.

Back on two feet he picked another sweet from the packet. This one he took and ghosted over his hip bones and, his well muscled thighs. The sensitive skin of his inner thighs pebbled with gooseflesh. He returned the chilly sweet to his responsive nipples. The sticky liquid that ran down his chest, it clung to the tuft of hair surrounding his cock. He slicked the rest over his straining prick. He was panting, and thrashing against the insistent fingers on his nipples. The foreplay had gone on long enough; he popped the icy sweet into his mouth unable to keep his fingers from his cock any longer. Grasping downward frantically, he cupped his balls in one hand, and his extremely engorged cock in the other. He took one, two, three, four – he wasn't going to get to five strokes. Crying out, he came in a fountain, spurting long white ropes over the rail and into the water. Still panting hard, he grabbed the railing for support as his legs trembled fiercely from the force of his orgasm.

Slowly, his breathing evened out. The lake was still calm, the sky still clear and the stars bright. The air was cooler now, and he was far more relaxed. Ice mice, who would have thought, a children's sweet could be so… erotic? Just thinking about them was making his cock twitch again. As he stumbled sleepily back to his bunk, his head swam with visions of the tasty little sweets. Tomorrow, he would need to ask Hermione where he could find some more.


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[info]eeyore9990
2008-05-07 11:49 am UTC (link)
Hee! Ice mice! Who would have thought it? *g* Viktor's a kinky little devil, isn't he?

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:03 pm UTC (link)
I couldn't resist!! Thanks for grinning and commenting!!

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[info]aylix_green
2008-05-07 11:51 am UTC (link)
Wow. *swallows* just, yeah. this was sosohot! I'm kind of 'ehh.' about Viktor most of the time, he just isn't one of my favorite characters, but this was amazing. It was totally believable that he'd be snogging Hermione and be aroused by her, but still be hesitant about her age. I loved that he was wandering around on the ship looking for a place to wank, too.

Should he? Would any truly straight man think of this?

This line made me crack up!

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:05 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad I could make Viktor hot!! Not one of my favs either but I wanted to try someone different!! Thanks for chuckling with me and commenting!!

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[info]blpaintchart
2008-05-07 12:08 pm UTC (link)
Blimey! I'm not usually particularly interested in Viktor, but what gorgeous descriptions of his body. Mmmmmmm.

I particularly loved the way he's thinking about himself; the comment about the snugness around his balls, and his opinion of his cock are really tasty - just narcissistic enough. And then the way he questions his actions, but gives himself over to the naughtiness!

So now what I want to know is... why don't they sell ice mice in my local shop?
*pouts*

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:06 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for the wonderful beta job and still commenting profusely!!
*kisses*

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[info]nehalenia
2008-05-07 12:33 pm UTC (link)
I would never have pictured the grim Bulgarian boy being this creative, but I find myself pleasantly surprised. The image of him coming over the ship railing -- whoa. And I just can't get over the idea that someone -- a perverted headmaster, perhaps -- is peering out his office window with a magical telescope and watching. (You know darn well there had to be a telescope amongst all those odd things Dumbles had in there.)

Great job!

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:07 pm UTC (link)
Voyeurs are always a possiblity!!! I loved your idea! Thanks for the lovely comment!! and the wonderful fest!

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[info]fbowden
2008-05-07 01:24 pm UTC (link)
Obviously, there is more to Victor than we all thought! He has a creative side :D Very hot, mystery author x

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:08 pm UTC (link)
Viktor is more kinky than creative....men and women everywhere should be thankful for that!! Thanks for commenting!!

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[info]torino10154
2008-05-07 01:31 pm UTC (link)
Hot. Love the description of his body and he does seem rather self-absorbed LOL. The sticky sweet icy liquid running down his chest-yum. Good job.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:10 pm UTC (link)
Ah, the athlete mentality and a little teen self absorption...made for a nice wank! Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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[info]lee_west
2008-05-07 02:12 pm UTC (link)
Yay, Viktor! Love him to pieces, generally rather enjoying what he thinks straight men don't, and with Charlie, but I loved him also with the ice mice.

And aww for him being so considerate of Hermione's age.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:11 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm with Charlie..yum!! Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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[info]alwaysasnapefan
2008-05-07 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Fuck.

I have to memory that.

I just love candy play, and I can't believe he stuck one up his arse! Mm!

The wank was very hot, with good description.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:12 pm UTC (link)
Thank you and thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!!

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[info]alwaysasnapefan
2008-06-17 04:16 pm UTC (link)
I ended up nominating it for best male fic wank.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-18 06:16 am UTC (link)
Thank you for that too!! *g*

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[info]who_la_hoop
2008-05-07 04:22 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm, kinky :) Very enjoyable, mystery author!

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:13 pm UTC (link)
'kink it does a body good' to quote a phrase!! Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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[info]r_grayjoy
2008-05-07 04:47 pm UTC (link)
I love Viktor; he's such an underused character in HP. I like the way you addressed the age difference between him and Hermione here. Lucky mermaids! They're sure getting and eyeful tonight -- no double entendre intended! ;)

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:14 pm UTC (link)
I'm sure someone caught the show!! Thanks for commenting and for the wonderful fest!!

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[info]kabal42
2008-05-07 04:55 pm UTC (link)
Ice mice indeed! I commend you for the use of those *S* I found the idea of Viktor wanking into the water very interesting - both hot and just a great idea. There's just something about water that's very sensual, it makes a lot of sense. Especially for someone living on a ship. It was a lovely image too, him standing there.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:15 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!! I liked the picture of the water and the railing myself!! Thank you for the lovely comment!!

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[info]westernredcedar
2008-05-07 08:00 pm UTC (link)
Ice mice, nipples, wanking, and dear Viktor being a perv. I am very very happy. :) Thanks mystery author!!

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:16 pm UTC (link)
*g* Glad this made you happy!! Pervy!Viktor was fun!! Thanks for commenting!

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[info]luvscharlie
2008-05-08 12:58 am UTC (link)
Ice Mice *g* Loved it.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:17 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!!

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[info]sweetmelodykiss
2008-05-08 02:00 pm UTC (link)
Wow, now that was hot. Very well done!

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:17 pm UTC (link)
*blushes* Thanks!!

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[info]harrysexxxmagic
2008-05-08 04:25 pm UTC (link)
Once again Victor isn't really of my faves and once again I was pleasently surprised. The imagedry, and I have to aggree with westernredcedar
ice mice ans nipples WOW HOTTT.
Definitely a different side of Vic.

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:18 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for reading and the lovely comment!!

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[info]harrysexxxmagic
2008-06-26 04:33 pm UTC (link)
It was my pleasure. You’re most welcome! I know how hard you and everyone else worked on this fest. Thanks for sharing :)
*HUGS*

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[info]ships_harry
2008-05-10 04:05 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, very inventive use of the sweets! Nom :D. Jerking off into the lake like that, fantastic. I find myself agreeing with Neha about voyeurs, and what a tasty notion it is :).

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[info]nimrod_9
2008-06-17 04:19 pm UTC (link)
I can't imagine someone didn't watch!! Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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