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Dexy ([info]dead_sexydexy) wrote in [info]dexy_demented,
@ 2008-04-23 19:57:00

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Entry tags:limerick, mwpp era, poetry, severus, sirius

Slimy Slytherin: Limerick; Sirius, Severus PG-13
Title: Slimy Slytherin
Prompt: [info]phoenix_flies drabble_a_thon: # 34 Parselmouth
Author: [info]dead_sexydexy in [info]dexy_demented
Rating: PG-13
Form: Limerick
Characters: MWPP, Snape
Notes: Sirius Pov. Mutual hatred mode.
Disclaimer: The Potterverse is not mine, I make no money from it, I don’t intend to harm it or anyone else.
Comments and Concrit: Are always welcome.


Slimy Slytherin

Slimy Slytherin scum through and through;
I despise him with hatred true.
Can't wait to hex him,
Anything to vex him.
Bet he's a Parselmouth too.



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[info]elethian
2008-04-30 10:50 pm UTC (link)
Hmmm.. too many syllables in the first line I think. I know you want to say "slimy Slytherin" but "Slytherin scum through and through" comes off better IMO.

Slytherin scum through and through;
I despise him; my hatred is true.
Can't wait to hex him
All just to vex him.
I bet he's a Parselmouth too.

(geez Sirius, lighten up. lol.)

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