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Dexy ([info]dead_sexydexy) wrote in [info]dexy_demented,
@ 2008-04-21 08:14:00

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Entry tags:limerick, pg, poetry, remus, sirius, sirius/remus, snape

Nightmare: Limerick; Sirius, Remus PG
Title: Nightmare
Prompt: [info]phoenix_flies drabble_a_thon: #8 Nightmare
Author: [info]dead_sexydexy in [info]dexy_demented
Rating: PG
Form: Limerick
Characters: Sirius, Remus, Snape. Sirius' POV (Could be Sirius/Remus)
Notes: Marauder Era
Disclaimer: The Potterverse is not mine, I make no money from it, I don’t intend to harm it or anyone else.
Comments and Concrit: Are always welcome.
Nightmare

Nightmare

"Wake up Moony. Mate, are you there?
I've just had an awful nightmare."

"Padfoot, you're shaking-
Cold, clammy, and quaking."

"I--I--dreamed I had the greasy git's hair."

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[info]lore
2008-04-30 09:04 pm UTC (link)
*SNICKER*

love, lore

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[info]dead_sexydexy
2008-04-30 09:43 pm UTC (link)
*g*

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[info]elethian
2008-04-30 10:54 pm UTC (link)
*giggles* That's cute!

Think the first-syllable stress on "nightmare" is tripping things up a little, and "the" is one too many in the last line, but you can't just say "dreamed I had greasy git's hair", unless maybe you want to capitalize it and make it a nickname in its own right? if not, I suggest...

"Wake up, Moony. Mate, are you there?
I've just had a dream -- well, a nightmare."
"Padfoot, you're shaking --
Cold, clammy, and quaking."
"I -- I dreamed I had Snivellus's hair."

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