Twilight (ex_twilight607) wrote in visions_in_grey, @ 2004-08-13 09:45:00 |
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Current mood: | amused |
Current music: | Nelli FolkLore |
Hey all...
I joined this community and have yet to post in it. I'll post the one I did this morning. Hope you like it. It is raw, haven't edited it.
I demand criticism. Please make it constructive, I would like to improve my style and your thoughts really help. Feel free to take a look through my journal, comment there as well.
The city I now call home...
Sitting on the curb
Watching the day go by
The cars come and go
Passing through
This sleepless wasteland
They call a city
Its a desert
A desert,
that has taken my breath away
A desert,
that I'm falling for
Never did I think it possible
That I would fall in love with this.
A place so barren
Yet so fertile
That I now call my home.
Will I ever go back?
Back from where I came?
I know not,
Time can only tell
And even it may not know
~Twilight