darththalia (darththalia) wrote in tpm_flashback, @ 2004-11-10 17:05:00 |
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Original poster: raina_at
Here's my penultimate Monday rec. Sorry I'm a bit late, just got back from vacation.
Title: Call, and raise you one
Author: Gloriana
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Q/O
Warnings: Domestic discipline, meaning good old-fashioned spanking
Author's e-mail, web site and/or LJ id: Gloriana.Reginata@virgin.net, gloriana
Link to story: Call, and raise you one
Reasons for recommending: Qui-spanking. Hot, sizzling, erotic, totally in character, drool-inducing, enthralling - and did I mention hot - Qui-spanking. Droool.
What, you need more? Why?
But ok. This is Gloriana, which means it's got a fascinating psychological component as well as sizzling hot sex. What I found especially interesting about the story was that for one, it was unclear up to a point whether Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are already lovers or not. Secondly, at first the concept of Obi-Wan disciplining Qui-Gon because he'd been 'naughty' was a bit strange, yet it topples over into amazingly hot very fast, and the change of perception is done subtely, the moment where punishment turns to sex, a vaguely odd situation into a deeply erotic one, is masterly.
Plus, any story that puts a naked Qui-Gon over Obi-Wan's knee and has him spanked with a hairbrush and manages to make this neither ludicrous nor out of character deserves to be recommended as many times as possible.
Quote from story: "You plan to spank me." There was no outrage there, just blank incomprehension.
"Yes, I do."
"I see." Qui-Gon seemed to need a few more moments to work his mind around the concept, so Obi-Wan let him have them, filling in his time admiring the hefty genitals so nicely displayed in front of him.
"And what," Qui-Gon cleared his throat before beginning again, "what if I say no?"
Obi-Wan looked at him assessingly. "Well, I can hardly throw you over my lap and make you stay there. You have rather an advantage in size over me, even if we discount what you can do with the Force."
Qui-Gon nodded, obviously bolstered by these facts.
"But then again, you gave me your word. So how much is that worth, Master? Is it enough to keep you in place over my knee?"
Oh, there were a few sweet rewards to being a padawan after all, and the look on Qui-Gon's face as he fought between pride and honour was one of them. Obi-Wan relished it while he could.
But, in typically Jinn-like fashion, Qui-Gon didn't deliberate for long. His counterattack was the one Obi-Wan had been expecting.
"While you were considering all these consequences, did you ever consider how easily I could take revenge once this is over? It's hardly unknown for a master to require his padawan to, oh, read the Senate proceedings for the last four months. Producing a full commentary thereon might be considered harsh, but it is fair to say it would have some benefits for said padawan."
"If you thought it was a good use of my time, I'm sure you'd set it for me. But just as revenge? Said master would know that was a breaking of the spirit of his word, as much as an outright refusal now would be. Wouldn't it?"
They stared at each other, once again at an impasse.