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Hello. I have a specific AU storyline in mind that I've been DYING to play.
Me: Zacky 'Vengeance' Baker is a patient in a psychiatric hospital called 'New Avalon' which setting is based in Estes Park, Colorado. Zacky has Paranoid Schizophrenia and is Committed into the hospital until the Doctors think he is well enough to go home. The hospital is world award winning, but from the inside its pretty corrupted. They do tests they shouldn't do, still use shock therapy, abuse the patients etc; so the patients don't get well, and they money keeps coming in. Zackys parents are rich and they didn't want to bother with him anymore so they dumped him in the hospital and let the doctors deal with him. Zacky doesn't like people touching him, and doesn't trust anyone at all. He tries to not make any eye-contact what-so-ever and hasn't ever been in a relationship.
You: Either Brian Haner Jr or Matt Sanders is a very violent criminal who murdered his entire family basically after years of abuse which royally messed with his head. Insted of pleading guilty and getting life in prison, Matt/Brian's lawyer pleaded instanity so he was sent to the hospital where he'd stay and be evaluated as to whether he was actually ill enough to stay and be treated. Matt/Brian is violent and full of hate, and doesn't trust anyone until he met the fragile shell of a boy named Zacky who changed his world.
They changed each others world, and they got better with each others help. Zacky learning to trust and look at people in the eye, and Matt/Brian leaning to actually love and be happy insted of being violent and terrified all his life. Of course, the hospital doesn't like it and its corrupted guards that take its crushed patients for granted in every single terrible way possible try to seperate the two boys, not caring at what cost it took.
Now, pretty much thats what I had in my mind, but I'm totally open for opinions and changes, except the characters. Everything else I'm open for. Any takers? And please, only rpers that write 4+ lines :)