I liked your way of describing Severus’ life without past, how he was haunted by the dream and the unanswered questions, and how the ”beautifully carved stick” seemed to offer him some comfort. I loved the scene where he found Spinner’s End and how he later accidentally ”summoned” Harry to his doorstep. Harry was so mature, good-natured and helpful. I particularly liked the way in which he persuaded Severus to brew and drink the potion. Lovely story.
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