I'm so pleased you like the way I wrote the characters! When I was given the assignment, I went to re-read some of your stories that I had saved. I couldn't hope to approach your depth of characterization, so I thought I'd let the story tell me where to take the boys.
I really wanted to show how strong Severus is, how he could still forge a life for himself even without his memories or magic. I also knew that somewhere inside him, canon Harry had a thoughtful, mature side, so I thought I'd show a less impulsive young man. Harry the whirlwind just happened, but I like the imagery.
Glad you liked the oral sex--I believed I knicked the idea from you! *shifts eyes guiltily*
So glad it impressed you enough to friend me, yeay!