I dunno what the problem is; the very point is that it's a transplanted Harry and Snape and not actually DanRad and Alan (although what they might be doing at Hogwarts, I am very curious!), isn't it? Not that I begrudge anyone being squicked by RPS; I'm a little woobly about it myself. But this is something different, right? (Or did I miss the point? *blush*)
Anyway, I'm very amused at how Severus is simultaneously both resourceful (speaking to Alan's girlfriend; "they want lights, I'll give them lights...") and just as ill at ease as Harry is, and the line about the play with the stylized horse was awesome.