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snarryhols (snarryhols) wrote in snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-24 13:06:00

Entry tags:

fic, giftee: alisanne, rated: nc-17

Fic: Visit To A Weird Dungeon
Title:Visit To A Weird Dungeon
Author: dementordelta
Giftee: alisanne
Word Count: approx 14,000
Rating: Adult
Pairing:SS/HP
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: Severus Snape and Harry Potter end up in the last place they ever expected.
Author's Notes: I sincerely hope my recipient enjoys this! It was a challenge and a pleasure to write for you! Many, many thanks to my always helpful, beta reader, whom I will shower with kisses once the reveals are up!

The author has been reminded that not everyone will be familiar with the original source material, both fannish and otherwise, that inspired this story. The title and the premise come from a classic Star Trek, The Original Series story, called "Visit to a Weird Planet", which in turn was based on a Gore Vidal play called, "Visit to a Small Planet." The author apologizes for any confusion.

Visit To A Weird Dungeon

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	drachenmina 2008-11-24 01:25 pm UTC (link)
	Oh, that was inspired! Great fun - although I must admit to being a bit squicked at the thoughts it conjured up of DanRad and AR getting it on! Glad you put in the bit about Snape being younger! ;D (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-18 11:34 pm UTC

	littleblackbow 2008-11-24 01:39 pm UTC (link)
	Holy Cow Creative!!! Wow, was that ever clever. And I love the idea of house-elf magic being able to slip them between the 'verses. Real time versus movie real time is also great!! Ali's super-lucky! And you get tons and tons of !!!!!s (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-18 11:36 pm UTC

alisanne
2008-11-24 02:17 pm UTC (link)

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
OMG, what a great story! *DANCES*
Poor Severus and Harry. Being thrown into Alan and Dan's lives was quite the adjustment. They did great, though. ;)
So many awesome lines! Badgers are better then sheep, eh? ;) *chortles*

And the sex... GUH! So yummy, as always 'mystery author'. *g* You really do such a great job with them. *happy sigh*
I have such a big grin on my face right now!
I'm at work so I can't gush as much as I'd wanted to, but I'll be back.
*dances away*

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dementordelta, 2008-12-18 11:38 pm UTC

	gingertart50 2008-11-24 03:52 pm UTC (link)
	Funny, hot, original and clever! Loved this one, excellent fic! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-18 11:38 pm UTC

	meri_oddities 2008-11-24 05:42 pm UTC (link)
	Heh. This was a lot of fun. I enjoyed reading it. Are you thinking of doing a Visit to a Weird Dungeon Revisited? That would be fun, too but gen, please. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-18 11:39 pm UTC

	felaine 2008-11-24 05:46 pm UTC (link)
	Very well done, different and clever. Lucky Ali. Felaine (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:23 pm UTC

	snarry_fan7 2008-11-24 06:03 pm UTC (link)
	Amazing work! I like how Snape and Harry switched places with Dan and Alan. Dobby and Winky being behind the matter was great and I like the thought of them going through dimensions to bypass anti-Apparition wards. Well done!~Sophia (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:26 pm UTC

	firefly124 2008-11-24 07:16 pm UTC (link)
	This is awesome! There are just so many things about it. Such an inventive setup. The interactions with the crew and Rupert! Though I have to admit, Snape with his nose buried in a "play with a stylized horse on the cover" probably gave me the biggest laugh. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:27 pm UTC

	torino10154 2008-11-24 07:53 pm UTC (link)
	Absolutely amazing! Harry having to keep Severus from hexing everyone, all the little hints of Dan and Alan's real lives sneaking through. I love the little details like Severus talking on the phone with Rima Horton! That just kills me. Wonderful that Dobby is still trying to help Harry and still screwing it up! Thoroughly enjoyable fic. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:29 pm UTC

	zephre 2008-11-24 08:09 pm UTC (link)
	this is so bizarre and wonderful. what a trip! great fun all 'round. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:33 pm UTC

	zephyr_macabee 2008-11-24 08:44 pm UTC (link)
	Yay, but I sure would love a story from the point of view of Alan and Dan. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:33 pm UTC

	(Anonymous) 2008-11-24 08:55 pm UTC (link)
	While this fic is obviously meant in good-natured humor, I'd really have appreciated a warning for (borderline) Real Person Fic. Because this is a HUGE, HUGE squick for some, including me. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-19 11:38 pm UTC

	cruisedirector 2008-11-24 10:01 pm UTC (link)
	I love Severus playing along but refusing to be a good sport about it. And Harry taking his opportunities where he finds them. g (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:18 pm UTC

	aeryun 2008-11-24 10:21 pm UTC (link)
	AW! So weird and sweet all at once! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:19 pm UTC

	ex_lilyseyes671 2008-11-25 01:48 am UTC (link)
	Oh, what a wonderful story! Excellent! There was a second classic Trek fanfiction story that was nearly as delightful as this one, The Face on the Barroom Floor, but of the all of them, this was my favorite! alisanne is a lucky, lucky girl! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:21 pm UTC

	thesewarmstars 2008-11-25 03:12 am UTC (link)
	How spectacular! Appallingly attractive - wonderful phrase. Totally did not see the house elf involvement coming. Very clever. Great sex, great premise. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:37 pm UTC

	eriador117 2008-11-25 04:34 am UTC (link)
	Oh, that was very imaginiative! Loved it :) RP fic doesn't bother me in the least, and it was done in very good taste. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:37 pm UTC

	whitecotton 2008-11-25 07:07 am UTC (link)
	Oh, this was wonderful. When Severus said "Let me look at you", after pulling off his t-shirt, I just knew your Snape and mine were the same breed. Cold and cutting, hiding a tentative desire for heat. (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:45 pm UTC

	bethbethbeth 2008-11-25 08:47 am UTC (link)
	I've loved these sorts of fanfictional intersections between canon universes and film sets ever since first reading "Visit to a Weird Planet" back in mumblemumble and this story was particularly well done. True to the spirit of the source material, but excellently voiced and creative (e.g., the solution to the mystery of House Elf travel at Hogwarts). (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:57 pm UTC

	estioe 2008-11-25 01:06 pm UTC (link)
	That was so much fun! I, for one, enjoyed the "hints" of RP fiction in this. So much that now I want to read about Alan and Dan's story, no matter if it's gen or slash. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-20 09:58 pm UTC

	nonajf 2008-11-25 04:33 pm UTC (link)
	I loved that old ST story, and I love your HP version of it! Though I can't help but wonder what Alan and Dan got up to at Hogwarts. :-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-23 11:01 pm UTC

	entrenous88 2008-11-25 09:38 pm UTC (link)
	Very fun! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-23 11:03 pm UTC

	oni_butterfly 2008-11-26 02:40 am UTC (link)
	Squee! This was just...SQUEE! So amazing! Great Job! WOOT! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-23 11:06 pm UTC

	dracofiend 2008-11-28 09:53 am UTC (link)
	Wow, that was pretty awesome. Really funny, and charming, and so impressive with the film set details! I had no idea about their assistants' names and such. :) I loved the little turns of phrase like the "chopped off head sort of noise"--and the last line was perfect. What a fun and sweet romp. ♥! (Reply to this) (Thread)

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dementordelta, 2008-12-23 11:07 pm UTC

orions_stars
2008-11-28 01:19 pm UTC (link)

I really enjoyed reading this story! I loved your explanation of house elf magic, and Winky's willingness to help. (I miss Dobby!) And great sex is always good. :D I liked that Snape had to be chased a little bit too. And I loved your ending.

However, the fact that you used the names, likenesses, and descriptions of the lives of real people made me uncomfortable. I do think that it would be a good idea to add a warning to inform readers so that they can make the decision to read before they start reading the story.

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