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snarryhols (snarryhols) wrote in snarry_holidays,
@ 2008-11-15 09:53:00

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fic, giftee: eriador117, rated: nc-17

Fic: Vanquished
Title: Vanquished
Author: regasssa
Giftee: eriador117
Word Count: 20197
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Severus Snape/Harry Potter, (Gilderoy Lockhart/Harry Potter), hints of Ron/Hermione, previous Harry/Ginny and implied Greyback/OCs
Warnings: (CHAN, NON-CON, TORTURE, hand jobs, blow jobs, spanking - see Author's Notes), biting, sensory deprivation, consensual D/s, penetration, rimming, desk!sex, hurt/comfort, first time, abuse of furniture and misuse of ink, slight Ginny bashing (I've been unreasonably honest to the stereotype of British teenaged girls), EWE?!.
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: As an Auror, it's Harry's job to bring in criminals like Fenrir Greyback. He doesn't let his personal life affect in his work. But when his work becomes uncomfortably involved in his personal life, Harry has to face his own fears before they consume him.
Author's Notes: Important note: this fiction contains R rated, noncon Gilderoy/Harry where Harry is only 12 years old. In regards to Fenrir Greyback, it also strongly implies the torture and murder of children. It is, I hope, delicately covered, but will no doubt squick some readers. Please consider this content before you read.

Vanquished

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ivylady
2008-11-23 07:49 pm UTC (link)

Very real and very intense. You managed to convey so many emotions in your writing--frustration, cruelty, and urgency just to name a few. While I was shocked that Lockhart had abused Harry, it was perfectly plausible with canon. The way he acted in the book was quite creepy, especially considering how young Harry was at the time.

I'm glad both Harry and Severus were able to let go some of their fears and rescue Rose. Fenrir is a nasty piece of work, so his death was welcome. Most excellent fic.

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regasssa
2008-12-17 05:57 am UTC (link)

Lockhart creeped me out sometimes too, and the amount of unrevealed time he spent with Harry in the books made my job here much easier. I did worry about writing him the way I did at times, but I'm glad it came out believable when it was through. I'm very pleased they rescued Rose and killed the bad guy too, but then, I couldn't very well kill her the first time I've ever written her, could I? Haha. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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