Oh, I'm so in love with your story! Their established relationship and unknowningly being surrounded by wizards and HERMIONE! I love that girl. This is exactly the kind of thing she would do too. The dog. *luved the dog* What a fabulous use of your prompts.
And when anybody has Severus saying, "My Harry" - they earn my undying devotion for life. :)
SO GLAD your story got posted for our Team. Go Snitches!