YOu know, I'm amazed when someone comes up with something original in the Potterverse after all this time.
I'm amazed. The idea of Snape somehow - and it's fine that we don't know how - finding himself in the very world he would have created if his teenaged ambitions had succeeded is completely new and intriguing. The Snarry aspect of it, just sweet and secondary. This is a lot of fun and well done. Well done!