lksdfasdf THIS STORY IS SO BRILLIANT! YOU'RE BRILLIANT! THANK YOU!
AH! You had all those little details that deviated from canon. And I just brushed them aside assuming you were only taking bits and pieces from the last book. It's so awesome.
I love your Harry all grown up. Coming without a touch? Hottest thing EVER. And the way you described their original relationship? So loving and such a contrast to Harry and Snape's relationship at the moment. It gave me so much hope.
Essentially you're brilliant and I'm so sad to see this go for team cauldron, but also so happy to see it posted in the games~