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snarrymod ([info]snarrymod) wrote in [info]snarry_games,
@ 2009-06-19 23:03:00

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Entry tags:free for all, opening games

OPENING GAMES FREE-FOR-ALL CHALLENGE No. 4 from Emilywaters1976
Our fourth Opening Games Free For All submission comes from a watcher of the Games, [info]emilywaters1976.


Title: Ninth Life
Author/Artist: [info]emilywaters1976
Thing/Place/Action:Three-Legged Cat /A Creaky Old House /Reclining
Drabble/Drawble/Ficlet/Limerick?: Ficlet
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: M. Angst, UST.
Notes/Disclaimers/Betas Post-war. Severus Snape is staying with Harry.



Harry walks quietly. The floor of the old, familiar home makes creaking sounds when Harry's bare feet slap against the aged wood. Severus is reclining in the armchair, appearing to be asleep, with a small black cat napping in his lap. When the cat is curled up like this, you can't see that one of its legs is missing. It looks like a perfectly normal, happy animal.

Everything looks different at this time of night. When the shadows thicken, the deep lines crossing Severus' face seem softer; it's easy to overlook the small scars on the man's hands, and the silver strands in his hair, or the fact that his old robe still looks a size too big for his all-too-thin frame. One might be tempted to believe that Severus is simply tired, rather than stripped bare by the war that had nearly claimed his life and sanity. One might be tempted to forget that some days, it's still uncertain whether or not Severus will make it...

Severus' eyelids flutter slightly. Is he dreaming? Or waking up?

Severus speaks without opening his eyes.

"Staring at me again, Potter?"

"Don't flatter yourself. I'm staring at the cat."

For a few minutes they pet the cat together. Harry's heart skips a beat when their hands meet in the midst of the cat's silky, rich fur. Severus' fingers are ice-cold. For a moment, Harry is tempted to do something unthinkable: take that frozen hand in his, and bring it to his lips, warming it with his breath...

Severus' eyes open wide.

"Stop that."

"Stop what?" Harry says, feigning innocence.

"Staring at me like I'm going to die any moment."

Harry looks down, and pets the cat again. The cat flinches slightly, when Harry's fingers come in contact with its deformed limb.

"Ever wonder how he lost that leg?" Harry asks.

Harry thinks about it all the time, to the point of driving himself insane. Was it an accident, a predator attack, or an act of human cruelty? A part of him doesn't want to know, but he continues speculate anyway.

"No. Though I do wonder how he managed to keep the other three."

Harry blinks rapidly, because that answer hurts so much – and he doesn't know why. All he knows is that he needs to squeeze his eyes tightly shut, and breathe very calmly, and not say anything for a while.

"Harry, don't," Severus says mildly, placing his hand on Harry's shoulder. "I may be on my ninth life, but I intend to make the best of it."

Harry tilts his head and presses his flushed cheek to the back of Severus' hand. Those long, slender fingers are less than an inch away from his lips. Just one quick, unassuming kiss would say everything... and likely a great deal more than Severus wants to hear.

"I know," Harry says finally. "Besides, I reckon, ninth life is the longest, anyway."




Thank you, [info]emilywaters1976



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[info]alisanne
2009-06-20 12:19 am UTC (link)
Oh.
*clutches chest*
Lovely and heartbreaking and so very Snarry.
Well done.

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wow!
[info]the_kinky_pet
2009-06-20 12:44 am UTC (link)
I've read quite a bit of your writing (and loved it!) and I think that, though this piece is so short, it might be my new favorite... (And not just because I have a cat who is missing an eye...) The language is so delicate and everything is so heart-rending and subtle. This is just marvelous. Thank you so much!

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[info]amanitamuscaria
2009-06-20 01:08 am UTC (link)
You've put a lot of emotion and possibilities into a very few words.
Lovely, sad, hopeful, tentative, like the first crocuses of spring.

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[info]majmunka
2009-06-20 01:52 am UTC (link)
It's beautiful and touching. But I can see the Snarry-blue is contagious :)

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[info]bk7brokemybrain
2009-06-20 01:56 am UTC (link)
Lovely. So much tension, so few words.

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[info]red_day_dawning
2009-06-20 02:01 am UTC (link)
That's beautiful. Sad, but so lovely.

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[info]veridari
2009-06-20 02:36 am UTC (link)
*weeps*

You broke my heart. Well done. *applause*

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2009-06-20 02:42 am UTC (link)
How wrenchingly beautiful! So much emotion packed into so few words!

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[info]dacro
2009-06-20 02:48 am UTC (link)
awww
breathtakingly beautiful.

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[info]kasmunaut
2009-06-20 03:55 am UTC (link)
Beautiful, touching, very tender!!!

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[info]eriador117
2009-06-20 04:24 am UTC (link)
So heart-rending in so few words. Lovely!

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(Anonymous)
2009-06-20 05:23 am UTC (link)
Lovely!

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[info]phantosma
2009-06-20 08:26 am UTC (link)
It's beautiful and touching.

Lovely!

*applause*

Take care, Patt

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[info]gingertart50
2009-06-20 09:01 am UTC (link)
Ohhh! Loved this, so much in so few words. Beautiful.

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2009-06-20 11:53 am UTC (link)
"Harry, don't," Severus says mildly, placing his hand on Harry's shoulder. "I may be on my ninth life, but I intend to make the best of it."

*sniffs, hugs Severus* that was lovely

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[info]joanwilder
2009-06-20 12:15 pm UTC (link)
Great use of your prompts, and I love the tenderness in Severus' restrained gesture, and Harry's longing for more.

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[info]leela_cat
2009-06-20 12:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that was lovely. And the three-legged cat was just the perfect touch.

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[info]dreamingjewel
2009-06-20 03:06 pm UTC (link)
Beautiful ficlet.

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[info]japonicastar
2009-06-20 05:12 pm UTC (link)
Nothing more to say than to echo everyone else and say it was lovely.

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[info]fanficforensics
2009-06-20 06:06 pm UTC (link)
I tend to run from anything mentioning hurt cats because that's one topic I just can't take, but this was so goddamn hopeful. Beautiful.

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[info]andreanna
2009-06-20 06:52 pm UTC (link)
This is sad and quiet and so very interesting. I love the hidden depths merely skimmed here. Beautiful. Thank you

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[info]amand_r
2009-06-20 08:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh Miss Emmilita, this is freaking fantastic. "No. Though I do wonder how he managed to keep the other three." ::dies:: Thanks for this!

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[info]calanor
2009-06-20 11:56 pm UTC (link)
Lovely and Warming..

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2009-06-21 01:38 am UTC (link)
Oh, that was heartbreaking but lovely. I love that tri-pod made a cameo. Wonderful work.

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[info]vividzephyr
2009-06-21 04:27 am UTC (link)
aww...that was sad yet sweet. It's too bad Harry doesn't do anything because I kind of get the feeling Snape might let him, lol.

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[info]yivel
2009-06-21 05:49 pm UTC (link)
So beautiful.

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-06-21 09:42 pm UTC (link)
*sniffles* That's lovely.

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[info]szefi
2009-06-22 01:05 pm UTC (link)
Sad and lovely.

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[info]torino10154
2009-06-24 08:40 pm UTC (link)
Sad and beautiful, so packed with emotion. Wonderful work.

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[info]snapessecret
2009-06-26 05:59 am UTC (link)
Beautiful.

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[info]snapechic76
2009-06-26 11:49 pm UTC (link)
Wonderful work as usual!

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[info]elvirablue
2009-06-27 06:44 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful. I love the solemn atmosphere and the carefully worded optimism from both of them, even though the kiss doesn‘t happen yet. Ninth life, FTW!

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[info]anya_elizabeth
2009-07-16 05:26 pm UTC (link)
*hugs self* Ohh Severus... A perfect splash of Snarry. <3

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[info]centaury_squill
2009-07-28 03:18 pm UTC (link)
This is so perfectly bitter-sweet. Thank you!

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[info]keyairreem
2009-08-04 05:07 am UTC (link)
More please!!!

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[info]amanuensis1
2009-08-05 04:27 pm UTC (link)
So sweet! I'm glad I still had this page open and finally got to read it!

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