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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2008-05-10 11:13:00

Entry tags:

ac1d6urn, entry, sinick, team phoenix

TEAM PHOENIX ENTRY: Sinick & Ac1d6urn "Red Right Hand"
Title: Red Right Hand
Author: sinick & ac1d6urn
Team: Phoenix
Genres: Postwar, Alternate Universe *Hover/Click for Games Definition of Alternate Universe*
Prompt: Ministry of Magic
Rating/Warnings: NC17; *warning for: total departure from epilogue canon, slight suggestion of previous partnerships, language.*
Word Count: ~49000
Summary: In a world where winning the war was only half the battle, will Harry Potter's crazy heroics be enough to save an outcast?
A/N: Thanks to naatz for beta-reading above and beyond the call of duty.

"Red Right Hand by Sinick & Ac1d6urn"

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alisanne
2008-05-11 01:21 am UTC (link)

Ahahahahaha!
What a great ride that was! Umbridge was perfect as a cruel and inventive Minister. Severus' inner thoughts were spot on, and the way he was treated by the wizarding world was just as I woud have expected, but for Harry of course, who directed him to Camden and who managed to give him back his life and his magic (although not his Patronus *g*).
The Veil! OMG, best use ever for it. And of COURSE Snape is a Clash fan. I could hear him singing London Calling.
Just brilliant.
Loved it.
Yay Team Phoenix!

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ac1d6urn
2008-05-11 08:40 pm UTC (link)

I have to say that Sinick's Umbridge deserves praise just for the amount of shivering and ugh!s her dialogue lines and actions received from me throughout this story.

I was cheering when she finally vanished off the scene, and the odd idea of Umbridge and Sirius stuck behind (or possibly underneath) the veil for all eternity does seem morbidly ironic, especially from Snape's point of view. I'm sure Harry'd disagree with him on that one.

Yay, Phoenix! :D *uses icon, just for the occasion*

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sinick
2008-05-11 09:10 pm UTC (link)

So cool to find a fellow Clash fan! How could I NOT use London Calling for this? Especially with the lines about the underworld and coming out of the cupboard. The latter advice was something both Harry and his "cape" followed. ;)

I'm particularly relieved that Snape's thoughts worked for you: since he was the POV character, his inner voice carried most of the story.

Thank you so much!

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