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snarrymod (snarrymod) wrote in snarry_games,
@ 2008-05-04 12:00:00

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TEAM DRAGON ENTRY: RaeWhit "Down the Rabbit Hole"
Title: Down the Rabbit Hole
Author: joanwilder (RaeWhit)
Team: Dragon
Genres: Postwar, Angst
Prompt: Separation Anxiety
Rating/Warnings/Kinks: NC-17
Word Count: 48,000+
Summary: For Harry and Snape, the war might be over, but the battle isn't.
A/N: Thanks to all of Team Dragon, for the camaraderie and teamwork par excellence. I'm so proud of all of you for pulling together, week after week, so that every one of us could do our best . A special smooch to the snarrymods who continue to make the Games possible, year after year. To jadzialove, my humble and heartfelt appreciation for all your diligence and support; I treasure you as a beta, writer, and friend. Thanks, too, klynie1, for your assistance and support.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and his universe belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Bloomsbury and Raincoast Books, and Warner Brothers, Inc. I make no money from writing fanfiction. It's my own private obsession.

"Down the Rabbit Hole by Raewhit"

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ex_nat232
2008-05-04 07:39 pm UTC (link)

I can't even find the right words. It's a lovely story, dear. The way both of them dealt with helplessness speaks tons about the characters. More than any description could do. I love the way you show instead of describe, it's o much easier to get involved with the situation, to feel the way they feel.

Your stories has this thing I'm not sure I could explain... most of fan fiction is only about two or more characters doing what the original author wouldn't make them do. But having a world you cannot talk about, a reason to confine yourself... it's more about life than just a way to get two characters into bed. And I just can't thank you enough for that! :)

(sorry for my english! The spell check says there's no errors in this comment, but sometimes I made up words or grammar...)

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	joanwilder 2008-05-04 09:37 pm UTC (link)
	Your English was fine--I understood completely. :) I'm pleased to hear you liked the story, and yes, sex is just one aspect of the life they have together. I was worried that I did too much 'telling' in fact, and now enough 'showing', so I'm happy to have your comment about that. (Reply to this) (Parent)

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