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lilyseyes ([info]ex_lilyseyes671) wrote in [info]snarry100,
@ 2008-02-22 01:36:00

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Current location:heading for bed!
Current mood: sleepy
Entry tags:challenge 98: war, lilyseyes

Challenge 98: War ~ Harsh Breath
Title: Harsh Breath
Rating:PG-13/Teen
Author: [info]lilyseyes
Word Count:100x6
Challenge: 98: War
Warnings: Implied mpreg, idiocy, angst, *wibbles*
Disclaimer: JKR owns the Potterverse – I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works.
Summary: Another in the Breathe
series







Sevvy chased after Padfoot, leading Papa and Lulu up to the special room for breakfast. He loved when Papa let them eat with the big kids! Padfoot wasn’t ‘low inside, though.

Climbing the stairs one at a time, Sevvy scampered into the big room with the huge doors to see Padfoot slide between two boys. Both boys had their wands out, with magic red-light coming out of the tips.

“Dawde, noooo!”

Sevvy ran towards Padfoot just as the dog turned and pushed him to the ground, but not before the red-light touched his hand and made it feel like fire.




Severus shifted Laurel higher on his shoulder as he followed his son into Entrance Hall. One of his snakes stood at wand-point with a Gryffindor, Little Severus and Padfoot square in the middle. His heart froze as he watched the spell-light of a stunning hex streak toward his son, but before he could move, Padfoot leapt to knock little Severus down.

Without conscious thought, his wand was in his hand; both seventh years were disarmed and suspended in mid-air by their ankles. Laurel gripped his robes and Severus could feel her magic swirl around them as little Severus whimpered softly.




Someone had made Sevvy hurt and Papa needed to breathe! Laurel fisted her hands in Papa’s robes, knowing Papa was really mad. She knew Papa would take care of things and Daddy was coming. Papa was furious, but she could feel Daddy’s anger pulsating, just as she could feel that Sevvy’s arm hurt. Her eyes narrowed as she looked around for the bad ones.

Hanging in the air were two big boys and Laurel scowled at them. She wished their hands hurt as bad as Sevvy’s did and smirked as both boys yelped. Sevvy whimpered and Laurel reached for him.




Harry drew a harsh breath, cold dread jolting him awake. Sevvy’d been hurt and Harry was out of bed and running.

Feet slapping against the cold floor, Harry flew into the Entrance Hall, registering that Severus and Laurel were fine as he slid to his knees beside Sevvy. The bruising of the soft skin enraged him and Harry clasped his precious son to his chest.

“The innocent are always the unfortunate victims of war,” Harry hissed in cold fury, his magic swirling. “This ends now!”

The Slytherin wet himself and the Gryffindor fainted as both their hair turned neon green.




“Momo, Papa!”

Little Severus sat on his lap with Dragon, pointing at the page in the book Severus was reading him. Harry sat curled against his side, Laurel already asleep. Padfoot slept by the fireplace with Onyx

The children seemed unscathed by the morning’s trauma. A plaster marked the spot where his son had been bruised, Laurel settling once she knew her brother was fine. It was he and Harry, whose uncontrolled magic had rattled the Entrance Hall walls, who’d needed reassurance. The incident put an immediate stop to the newest inter-House war.

Severus leaned over, kissing both dark heads.




Harry sighed as the lean arms slid around him, embracing him. Turning into the lean chest, Harry entwined legs as he snuggled. The incident frightened him more than he wanted to admit.

“You need to retire, Severus,” Harry muttered into the warm skin. “Or I’ll be hexing the miscreants often.”

“There’s a reason dueling isn’t permitted in the corridors,” Severus’ voice rumbled under his ear.

Harry sighed harshly. “Yeah, hexing toddlers is bad form.”

“Indeed, my Harry,” the voice said, “and I must even tolerate the mutt now.”

Harry rubbed against him. “Maybe I can take your mind off it.”




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[info]ensnarryed
2008-02-22 10:30 am UTC (link)
And this would be ONE good reason to run around screaming GO TEAM DRAGON!

:)

Plus dragons are green and so are Slytherins, and so is Snape (a Slytherin, not green^^).

...

Oh, and one other thing...

:P

After a Dragon is done with them...

Phoenix... tastes like chicken. :))))

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 08:52 pm UTC (link)
Indeed!

GO TEAM DRAGON

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[info]ladylark
2008-02-22 01:15 pm UTC (link)
Very nice.

I've not been commenting much, but getting over being sick with one thing and now hoping that I'm not coming down with something else.

Thank you for sharing this with us. It's a wonderful thing to read first thing in the morning.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 08:54 pm UTC (link)
I hope you feel better sonn! *hugs*

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[info]hambares
2008-02-22 01:45 pm UTC (link)
Oh poor Severus, he has to be nice to "the mutt now." Harry will help with that.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 08:54 pm UTC (link)
*snicker* Absolutely!

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[info]venturous
2008-02-22 03:57 pm UTC (link)
yay! protective!Harry to the rescue!
SS/HP= good role model for the Houses to cooperate, on better things than tormenting toddlers!

hmmm, Dragon/Phoenix, Slytherin/Gryffindor, green/red....

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 09:10 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]snarrysgirl
2008-02-22 04:00 pm UTC (link)
awww, poor little sevvy!!!! Those stupid students. Very well done =]

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 09:15 pm UTC (link)
Sevvy exacted his revenge - he does like his green!

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[info]alisanne
2008-02-22 08:36 pm UTC (link)
Awww, not too angsty! *hugs*
It just makes them pull even closer and gives Harry a chance to teach those silly students a lesson.
Sweet, darling!

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 09:26 pm UTC (link)
:-D Sevvy inspired me! *grumbles* need light fluffy spring like prompt...leprechauns and snakes, or daffodils and tuplips or baby animals...like dragons...

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[info]felaine
2008-02-22 09:14 pm UTC (link)
Oo, oo,. sooooo good!!!

*jumps up and down like a crazy woman*

Your writing is exciting and entertaining and loving,
all at once.
Quite a trick, but your devoted fangirls love you for it.

??Is Padfoot Sirius in some form? Or would that be telling?

Felaine

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 09:35 pm UTC (link)
*blushes* fangirls? Really?

Both Harry and Severus seem to think there is a bit of Sirius in the 'dawde' - Sevvy just loves
him!

Thanks, sweetie!

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[info]sassy_cissa
2008-02-23 05:50 am UTC (link)
Such a great piece. I love Harry's line: “The innocent are always the unfortunate victims of war,” - so very poignant.

Poor little Sevvy and yay for Padfoot protecting him.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-23 10:02 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much, sweetie - you always make me feel so good!

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[info]night_childe25
2008-02-24 06:13 am UTC (link)
Yay for Padfoot! Such a good doggy, saving Sevvy like that. Poor little Sevvy. *kisses his injured hand* I have a feeling those two students won't be hexing anyone else any time soon. Green hair. *grins* Sevvy does love turning things green. I love protective Harry, Severus, and Laurel. Poor Severus, having to put up with Padfoot. Harry will take his mind off of it, I'm sure. I loved it, as always. Thanks for sharing.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-24 09:47 am UTC (link)
You are so welcome - your lovely comments always bring a smile and Sevvy sends kissed back to you!

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[info]rakina
2008-02-24 07:56 pm UTC (link)
YAY! Team Dragon certainly roars!

Lovely stuff as ever. I love seeing Padfoot with them. 'Dawde'!
Sevvy is just too adorable, and Laurel is quite scary for a baby! Awesome.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2008-02-24 09:59 pm UTC (link)
Sevvy seems such a perfect combiation of his parents, while I think Laruel is already channeling Severus' Slytherin tendancies...

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[info]rakina
2008-02-24 11:00 pm UTC (link)
That icon is so awesome, isn't it?
Such tenderness...
*goes off to write something schmoopy*
Well, I tried, but both the fics I have going at the mo are angsty or don't show Sev in quite that light. I'll have to live this lovely Severus to you, who write him so perfectly.
*cuddles*

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