Very, very nice. This Pomfrey is easy to picture as a pairing for Snape - a woman who cares about him and therefore not willing to put up with his guff, and perceptive enough to see how Tobias for who he is. And I really like the Tobias you gave us. It's great to see a realistic picture of a man who cares very much about his family, but does not know how to show it and is well aware he is powerless to defend either of them.