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snapelyhols_mod (snapelyhols_mod) wrote in snapelyholidays,
@ 2010-12-15 00:53:00

Entry tags:

2010_fic, fic4:twilightsorcery, handjob, snape/lucius, snape/narcissa/lucius

Gift fic for twilightsorcery, En Prise, adult
Recipient: twilightsorcery

Author: fluffyllama

Title: En Prise

Characters: Severus Snape/Lucius Malfoy (with a little Snape/Lucius/Narcissa)

Rating: Adult

Summary: The Order want Severus. The Malfoys want Severus. Severus would just like a bloody week off.

Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling.

Word count: ~3,200

( En Prise )

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fanficforensics
2010-12-15 05:11 pm UTC (link)

Oh, this is just delicious. I don't know what I like best -the pairings in and of themselves, the engaging style, the offhand mentions and cameos of utterly unhelpful Order members, the way Lucius and Narcissa rather kindly but with much determination toss Snape back and forth between them until he snaps... What a great read. I absolutely love this. It makes me wish Dumbledore and Voldemort and all the rest would just leave the three of them alone forever and fight their own war for once ;)

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	lookfar 2010-12-15 05:40 pm UTC (link)
	So funny! I love the droll tone here. Oh, poor Severus, held captive in Malfoy Manor. (Reply to this)

	snapesgirl 2010-12-15 05:46 pm UTC (link)
	this is very delicious. love Severus demanding one thing than sending messages to leave him alone. (Reply to this)

	alisanne 2010-12-15 07:30 pm UTC (link)
	Ahahahah! What a delightful romp! Trust Severus to be so at ease with being a double spy yet completely flummoxed when it comes to this sort of play. g I love the turn-around in the end. For him to go from begging to be 'rescued' to demanding the Order (useless twits) leave him alone was just perfect. g Well done! (Reply to this)

	torino10154 2010-12-15 11:40 pm UTC (link)
	Nice. I love the way Lucius and Narcissa take such good care of him, slowly but surely becoming more and more obvious (although not to Severus it seems). Finding himself sandwiched between them, I can't imagine he'd be in any hurry to leave. Well done. (Reply to this)

	countesszero 2010-12-16 05:56 pm UTC (link)
	i loved this! i loved how lucius (and narcissa) were pursuing snape, the poor man :)) the sex with lucius was delicious! and i loved the end! (Reply to this)

	snegurochka_lee 2010-12-17 06:05 am UTC (link)
	Ahaha, that was marvellous! (Reply to this)

	dexstarr 2010-12-17 06:37 am UTC (link)
	Slash normally isn't my thing, but this was a delight to read. I loved the Malfoys trying to seduce Severus, and the dialogue and details were just lovely. (Reply to this)

	k8bnimble 2010-12-17 12:20 pm UTC (link)
	This is a much better way to be a captive at Malfoy Manor than the Dungeons! I loved Lucius and Narcissa here and completely clueless Snape. Fun read! (Reply to this)

	dreamy_dragon73 2010-12-18 04:36 pm UTC (link)
	This is wonderful! I love that Lucius and Narcissa take such good care of Snape. No wonder, he changed his mind and told the order to sod off in the end. :) (Reply to this)

	atdelphi 2010-12-20 06:17 pm UTC (link)
	laughs gleefully Oh my, how much do I love the idea (and the execution) of this? Wonderfully done, Mystery Author! (Reply to this)

	kelly_chambliss 2010-12-23 03:52 am UTC (link)
	really, it would be rude to just leave when your hosts were so hospitably curled up around you I've always thought Severus would have good manners. /g/ Great fun, great snark, great summary. (Reply to this)

	leela_cat 2010-12-30 05:11 am UTC (link)
	Those last lines are so perfect. I really enjoyed this story, especially the way that Lucius and Narcissa simply took care of everything to save Snape. Very well done. (Reply to this)

	twilightsorcery 2011-01-04 02:11 am UTC (link)
	Ooooooh. Oh, this was fantastic! Thank you so much! Things I totally love about this: - Severus's snarky, practical voice - The subtle seduction from Lucius that Severus doesn't pick up on - OMG HOT WALL!SEX - Buttons scattering - The Order being totally useless - The ending :D :D :D Thank you!!! (Reply to this)

	amanitamuscaria 2011-01-05 07:16 am UTC (link)
	OMG! Funny, sexy, hot! Of course both sides want Snape; it just depends on what they're offering - at the moment, it looks like a clear Slytherin win ... (Reply to this)

	luciusmistress 2011-01-09 06:41 am UTC (link)
	I loved how suspicious Severus was :) I'm glad he got to enjoy some Malfoy hospitality eventually ;) The Order trying to "rescue" Severus = WIN! :) I loved, loved, loved this! (Reply to this)

r_grayjoy
2011-01-11 03:45 am UTC (link)

Okay, so my initial reaction upon reading this is: ::snnnnnneerrrrrrrk::

First of all, your summary FTW.

And, oh, your Snape is just so very Snapely! The dry wit just cracked me up throughout this entire thing.

Gazing up at the hazy figures crowding above him, he wondered which side they belonged to.

When it occurred to him that it didn't really matter, he started to laugh.

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It was still funny when he awoke. -- And that was when I knew I was going to like this fic.

That was at least two more problems than he could deal with right now, he decided. -- ::snicker:: Indeed.

"Fine," Severus snapped. "Never mind the blow to the head, I'll just keep working, shall I?" -- Poor, pissy, put-upon Snape! LOL

'Get me OUT OF HERE.' -- AHAHA, just the sort of pissed off Patronus message he'd send!

Of course he'd become totally irate when he thinks he's being made fun of and being used for sport. And of course it's been so long that he'd come all over poor Lucius in about ten seconds flat. Bwahaha!

Brilliant, hilarious ending, and just... so... Snapely! So much fun. XD

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	sealcat 2011-01-21 03:27 am UTC (link)
	Wonderful! And I hope Severus have a great week off at Malfoy Manor :D (Reply to this)