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snapelyhols_mod ([info]snapelyhols_mod) wrote in [info]snapelyholidays,
@ 2010-12-14 00:22:00

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Entry tags:2010_fic, fic4:alisanne, first_time, forced_bonding, h/c, mpreg, rimming, snape/harry

Gift fic for alisanne, A Heart's Desire, adult
Recipient: alisanne



Author: lilyseyes

Title: A Heart's Desire

Characters: Severus Snape/Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Draco Malfoy, Ron Weasley, Pansy Parkinson, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Lucius Malfoy

Rating: adult

Content Info: *Forced/Accidental bonding, hurt/comfort, first-time, rimming, mention of Mpreg*

Summary: Severus is living quietly after the war, brewing potions for a living. Who would want to send him a letter cursed with Dark magic?

Disclaimer: The world of HP and its characters belongs to Rowling - no money is made off this work of fiction, it is for entertainment only.

Word count: ~15,600

Author Notes: Betaed by leela_cat and sevfan - thank you so much! - thank you so much!




( A Heart's Desire )









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[info]schnuffie
2010-12-14 11:21 am UTC (link)

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 07:51 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]alisanne
2010-12-14 05:56 pm UTC (link)
Oh, mystery author, you sneaky thing! *glomps you hard*
First off, if you are not who I think you are I will eat my hat! *g*
Secondly, you have included some of my very favorite things here, thank you so much, darling! Forced bonding, snarky!Severus, Lumione and Harry being friends with Draco all make me smile. The addition of sizzling sex and that sweet touch of uncertainty on both Harry's and Severus' parts made me melt.
I loved the details about the curse, and of course Harry managed to turn it into a luscious sexy bond instead of an enslavement curse. That's what he does, bless him. *g*
I also adored how Hermione showed up after the curse and practically THREW Harry at Severus. *giggles* That's SO her.
Draco was fun, as was the entire supporting cast, although I did want to hex Wood a couple of time. ;)
In sum: YAY! ♥

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To Alisanne with a plea...
[info]ensnarryed
2010-12-16 04:05 pm UTC (link)
Dear [info]alisanne,

[Please tell me who you think wrote this story! It's the only snarry so far! Of course I want to know!]

Sincerely,
[info]ensnarryed

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 07:53 am UTC (link)
I can't tell you how delighted I was to write this for you and how thrilled I am that you did like it! *smishes you* Thank you!

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[info]alisanne
2011-01-22 09:38 pm UTC (link)
I adored it. Thanks again, love! ♥

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[info]torino10154
2010-12-14 10:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh that was lovely. The effects of the curse were great--I love when bondmates need to touch. Not at all surprised who the 'bad guy' turned out to be, the toad. Nice job!

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 07:56 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you!

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[info]veridari
2010-12-15 04:18 am UTC (link)
Forced bonding, lots of touching, snarky Snape who doesn't want to admit his feelings for Harry, a great cast of extras...what the heck isn't there to love about this? Oh, and Severus saving Harry! One of my BIG favs! You definitely pushed lots of happy buttons in this one. :D

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 07:58 am UTC (link)
*hugs you* Thank you so much for your encouragement! I am so glad you liked it!

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[info]fancypantsdylan
2010-12-15 11:49 am UTC (link)
I just loved this. Love unintentional bonding fics to bits and this hit the spot right on.
Thoroughly enjoyable read :)

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:06 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! *hugs*

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[info]ensnarryed
2010-12-16 04:31 pm UTC (link)
This is snarry. *smiles impossibly wide* I have also read the highlighted spoilers.. and I love this even more now. =P Though hopefully I will get to read this sometime relatively soon, also.... ;)

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:07 am UTC (link)
Thanks for commenting - I hope you enjoy the story when you do read it.

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[info]k8bnimble
2010-12-17 12:18 pm UTC (link)
I love a good forced bonding fic and this hit on all cylinders. A snarky Snape that secretly yearned for Harry, a Harry that's mature and happy and willing along with a little mystery. I loved how Hermione was having to hit them on the heads to get them to see what was going on. As she would say, "Boys!"

Wonderful!

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:08 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much - I'm thrilled you liked the story!

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[info]angela_snape
2010-12-18 09:34 pm UTC (link)
Yay! for forced bonding... What a wonderful story - the effects of the bond, the mystery of who cast it, the way they all came together to try and sort it all out. Wonderful!

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:09 am UTC (link)
*hugs* Thank you so much!

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[info]cardigrl
2010-12-19 01:58 am UTC (link)
Awww. Good for that "Potter dumb luck". And happy endings. And an intriguing mystery to boot.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:09 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story - thank you!

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[info]atdelphi
2010-12-20 06:01 pm UTC (link)
Oh, very sweet. I loved the Snape-snark, and I am always in awe of writers who can coordinate a supporting cast in as much detail and charm as you've done here.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:10 am UTC (link)
Thank you for your kind words - I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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[info]kelly_chambliss
2010-12-21 01:00 pm UTC (link)
Very fun. Severus is a snarky delight, and I really enjoyed seeing all the characters -- like a Hogwarts reunion. Even Poppy! (I love Poppy).

"I suppose you may call me Severus, as we are currently sharing a bed."

Haha! That's the Snape I love.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:14 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]magialuna
2010-12-24 04:27 am UTC (link)
This was really fun. Lots of mystery. forced touching for our two heroes, and the added friendships and Lumione was awesome. I am a massive sucker for "can't we all just get along fic." You tricked me too, because it looked at the beginning like you were setting up poor Lucius to be the bad guy and he's such a sweet sort, really I was relieved when he turned out not to be naughty. He's far too pretty to be bad.

Favorite moment had to be when Harry asked Severus if they could "just have sex instead of rubbing one off quickly while pretending to be asleep." That cracked me up. Such a Gryffindor.

Loved Severus and Lucius discussing how to try to get their spouses to do what they want near the end as well, and the changed decorations at Malfoy Manor and Severus' comment...lol. Very cute.

Really enjoyed this from start to finish. Still sitting here with a grin. Very sweet fun story.

Clare

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:16 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much for your kind woords! I am so glad that you enjoyed the story and I had a lot of fun with the Lumione!

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[info]leela_cat
2010-12-28 07:38 am UTC (link)
The details of this story just make this post-DH world come alive for me. Snape and Draco running an apothecary, and Harry dropping by regularly but never quite getting up his Gryffindor nerve to ask Severus out. And the curse is so very well thought out, along with the villain of the piece. Grrr.. do not like that person. But mostly it's snarky Snape and Harry pulling things together and turning the curse on its head that make this into such a fun and wonderful story.

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:19 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much for everything you did to help - this story wouldn't have been written if it hadn't been for you! *hugs you*

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[info]countesszero
2010-12-28 05:20 pm UTC (link)
forced bonding is so lovely with snarries! this was very lovely and sweet!

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:20 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]szefi
2011-01-09 08:12 am UTC (link)
Accidental forced bonding, yay! Leave it to Harry to save Severus and get his desire in one go:)

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:20 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:37 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]ensnarryed
2011-01-14 03:00 pm UTC (link)
This is so sweet! And has lots of favourite moments! ;3 *goes to add to Memories*

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:37 am UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked the story!

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[info]sealcat
2011-01-21 04:37 am UTC (link)
Lovely and wonderful, I am very glad they finally got what their Heart's Desire!! :)

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[info]ex_lilyseyes671
2011-01-22 08:38 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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