I truly loved this from beginning to end! Adored your cantankerous Snape, just resisting Harry at every turn through so much of the story...and I held my breath at "the kiss"...I knew it would probably not turn out the way I expected but I wasn't sure! The twist was a delightful surprise. Whew!
Minerva is another one of my favorite characters and you used her magnificently here. Great job, hon! Lovely story!
Someoldcat...I know this pairing isn't your ship but you sure couldn't tell it from your illustrations, because their connection was *definitely* there! I do love your Severus and your older Harry so, so much and your expressions capture so much emotion...both pieces were fantastic additions to the story. Great job!