Unbroken_halo: What's NOT to love about powerful!Harry/lecherous!Snape?? You played it so well, here, and my favorite scene was when Harry was administering the "kiss" and it turned into a real kiss. Severus was so ready to go...but not. I thought you used Minerva perfectly in this story (and I have a weakness for Severus and Minerva as friends). How Severus behaved after leaving her care was so Severus as well. Harry as hands-on Healer was also inspired - how he got into the shower with Severus so easily and almost clinically and I giggled at Severus trying to cover himself with a washcloth. :) He sure changed his tune later, and the suggestive talk (Harry getting him "up") was fun too.
someoldcat: I always love your Severus and love the pieces you've done here (despite the lack of...um...nakedness. lol). I love your older Harry and OMG the expression on Severus' face in the first piece and Harry's in the second. Just perfect. You draw Snape so much like I imagine him from the books - flawed, big-nosed and imperfect yet flawed and very human.