Unbroken Halo: Thanks for your story! I really love Powerful!Harry stories. Lecherous!Severus is to die for, too! What is really delightful is watching Severus overcome so much of his baggage, and a mature, Harry helping him through it. And I love seeing Harry as something other than an Auror or DADA teacher.
someoldcat: I adore the expressions on the faces in the bedroom scene. Severus looks so frightened and overwhelmed, and you can really see the patience on Harry's face. I think some of the power of the scene is in the bold lines. Severus's expression, the lines of his bed clothes and linens, the way his hand seems to twitch, all adds to the tension, his panic. The Lecherous!Severus picture--the heavy-lidded eyes, the sensuality in his face--yummmmmm!