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challenge_mod (challenge_mod) wrote in severus_sighs,
@ 2010-07-23 17:48:00

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art, event: grand challenge 2010, member: deathjunke, pairing: severus/ron, rating: r

Whores in Towers by deathjunke
Title: Whores in Towers
Artist: deathjunke
Pairing: Severus /Ron
Rating: R
Medium: Pencil, acrylic paint and photoshop for touch ups.
Warnings: Highlight to view: dark theme, M/s overtones
Theme: Quest
Prompt: Let slip the dogs of war.
Summary: The consequences of war for the victors and down trodden.
A/N: I never draw faces, this was very difficult for me (which is the point of a challenge I guess) so forgive me for any oddities. Well... enjoy.

The dreams were driving him insane. Severus grit his teeth and raked his fingers through his hair.

“They’re shaking again,” Ron stated, the chain jangling as he approached. “Have another dream?”

“Shut up.”

“You shouldn’t drink... makes dreams feel real.”

“I suppose you'd know?” The question came as a snarl. Fear made him angry-- here was the perfect outlet. Severus reached out, gripped the chain and jerked the boy forward. “What would you know? Here -- in this fucking tower -- there's no war here -- only you pretty whores.”

Ron's blue eyes were ablaze with fury, his mouth a fierce snarl. “Whose fault is that?”

Like Lily; passionate, freckled and unafraid of Severus' demons.

“Shut up, boy.”

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magialuna
2010-07-23 10:18 pm UTC (link)

All of this is really lovely...but what really keeps drawing me back (and what would also kill the picture for me if it were wrong) is the eyes. Their eyes are so terribly intense and drawn to each other. That is what really makes this work for me. I don't even really see most of the picture when I look at it--I keep being drawn into the battle between their eyes.

Very powerful painting and ficlet.

Clare

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	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:21 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much ^^ and I'm glad my eyes were up to par (i tend to feel the same when it comes to pictures) (Reply to this) (Parent)

k8bnimble
2010-07-23 10:51 pm UTC (link)

Wow - I never really considered how Ron could be reminiscent of Lily (although I did Ginny so how weird is that considering my usual slash lens?)

I love Ron's defiant look even though he's not in a position to fight back. Seems he's a good matched for troubled Snape here. I love the textures and mottled colors. I think you did the faces quite well. I love the intensity between them.

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deathjunke
2010-07-24 06:30 am UTC (link)

Thank you! Ron's not the type to give up or to give in, which i think is what snape needs in dystopia. I'm glad i could illustrate his resistance :?)

And as for my Ron and Lilly similarities, they actually came about when i was reading book 5. Neither one of them has patience for bullies, both have quick tempers, will go the extra mile for a friend (unless they feel scorned) and both are red heads XD (I've always had a thing for red hair ever since i was a wee ankle biter). The Ginny and Lilly comparison that's seen in a lot of fics doesn't work for me. They're too different in my opinion. I cant see Lily ever consenting to staying behind and wait for her man. I think she'd be the kind of woman who would stand on the battlefield with him fighting tooth and nail.

not to mention i just really hate Ginny.

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conzieu
2010-07-23 11:51 pm UTC (link)

I love your Ron. He is so defiant. And his snarly lips (That's not an easy facial expression to get right, and it is perfect).
And the eyes. The intensity of their gazes.
The hand and chain in the foreground, with the thumb applying pressure adds a lot of tension to the picture though it's not obvious at first, because their eyes draw us in.
Did you right the drabble before or after the drawing?
Powerful! Thanks for sharing

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	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:32 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much ^^ In all honesty i took great pleasure in drawing that chain and collar (one of my favorite kinks). Seems i'm not as terrible at faces as i think :D thank you again (Reply to this) (Parent)

	silenceberry 2010-07-24 12:21 am UTC (link)
	Oh, my,my I almost can envision Snape taking out a whip and whipping Ron for being such an impertinent boy. Wow, I love it! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:34 am UTC (link)
	I'm loving you right now. you kinky thing you ;3 I didn't have enough time to finish the fic that went with this piece but you hit the nail on the head. that's pretty much what was going to happen after this scene :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	roozetter 2010-07-24 01:29 am UTC (link)
	It's a very interesting picture. Ron looks so vulnerable, yet defiant. But, Severus? He looks so sad! I think he's grateful for Ron's presence, if only to keep his demons at bay a bit longer. Good work, Sweets! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:38 am UTC (link)
	Thank you ^^ i'm glad you like it.and yeah Severus is sad. He's in a precarious position that's eating away at him and Poor Ron is just stuck. but they're good for each other...i hope :3 (Reply to this) (Parent)

	veridari 2010-07-24 03:03 am UTC (link)
	Whoa...this will punch you in the gut. That look on Ron's face says SO much. The expression in the eyes speaks volumes. Powerful art. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:39 am UTC (link)
	hugs thank you so much :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	joanwilder 2010-07-24 04:48 am UTC (link)
	So happy to see this pairing, and in a dystopia yet! Snape's in all his ugly glory, both in the art and text, and that it's Ron makes it all the worse, I imagine. Great entry! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:41 am UTC (link)
	Oh this pair is one of my guilty pleasures :3 I'm glad you like it! thank you for commenting. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	atypicalsnowman 2010-07-24 05:22 am UTC (link)
	I never thought of Ron-as-Lily, so this came as a surprise to me. Honestly, the look in Ron's eyes says it all. His defiance is brilliant here. I'm glad to see this pairing as well. I think it's the first I've ever seen. Well done. : ) (Reply to this) (Thread)

deathjunke
2010-07-24 06:47 am UTC (link)

Thank you very much :D

I think Ron and lily share some traits; Hatred of bullies, quick tempers, too stubborn to give in, will go the extra mile for a friend (unless they feel scorned), Willing to stay and fight no matter what and both are red heads! And it makes Ron all the more Snape Compatible XD

If you're interested in the pairing i suggest you look into some of

starstruck1986's work. She writes them so incharacter and so well that it tends to slip right into place times.

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	deathjunke 2010-07-24 06:48 am UTC (link)
	oops Star is on LJ (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2010-07-24 07:49 am UTC (link)
	Ooooh as beautiful as when I beta'd the art for you (can someone do that? PMSL). And SO pleased to see you waving our little Ron/Severus flag on such a big fest. You know how much I love Ron-as-Lily imagery. In fact it makes me quite giddy (you also knew that). Love the expressions in their eyes and the intensity of it all. Brilliant! Starstruck1986 (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-25 04:09 am UTC (link)
	Yes you were my art beta^^ and i must squish you for that! squish. How could i not flaunt the Ron/Snape (see i didn't call it rape this time! XD) All i need to do now is work up the balls to write an actual full length story about this pair instead of my margin doodles and fawning . :3 And i'm glad you like it ^^ funny enough i drew it with you in mind! lol. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2010-07-25 08:20 am UTC (link)
	You must write that fic! Must, must, MUST. I really want to know how Ron ended up a whore in the tower. And how Severus grows to love him (because you know he will grin) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-25 02:21 pm UTC (link)
	Well i had started the fic its about 2k right now but i dont think i'll be able to finish it any time soon. one day though. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	(Anonymous) 2010-07-24 02:36 pm UTC (link)
	I love this! You did an amazing job of conveying Snape's frustration and his inner turmoil--his 'demons', as you say, and Ron is so perfectly Gryffindorian and ideally... Ron. :) The painting you did--wonderful! The intensity is very powerful. So very well done! (This is dogsunderfoot, by the way) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-25 04:10 am UTC (link)
	You're so nice! Smooches Thanks bunches. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	gingertart50 2010-07-24 04:26 pm UTC (link)
	This is decidedly spooky, in a shiver-making kind of way. Intense and powerful. I really like your tortured Snape here, and Ron's courage in facing him. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-25 04:12 am UTC (link)
	Thank you so much ^^ I tend to always torture Snape and Ron. My day wouldn't be complete otherwise XD (Reply to this) (Parent)

countesszero
2010-07-24 09:49 pm UTC (link)

i always disliked the way so many promising characters were treated by jkr. i loved ginny but then in the end of book 6(?) she was less self confident than i seemed, and hermione who was a great character in the beginning was by the end of book 5 an annoying mum-substitute.

and especially ron: he is smart and complex but very often used for comic relief. and i also thought like snape he deserved to be treated better!

i quite like ron/snape pairings so i adored your intense picture and words! very well done!

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	deathjunke 2010-07-25 04:15 am UTC (link)
	Oh yeah. I couldn't agree with you more. I think JKR got sick of the series and said "Eff character development for you guys" after a little while. Hermione became a nag, Ginny never developed beyond "I LOVE harry potter cuz he's awesome! and Harry Potter! and he has Oedipus syndrome!" and my poor Ron sighs and thank you so much ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed my piece (Reply to this) (Parent)

	centaury_squill 2010-07-25 08:56 am UTC (link)
	I don't think I've come across this pairing before. Intriguing, particularly how Snape sees Lily in Ron. You did a great job on their faces, especially their eyes, and I love Snape's stranglehold on Ron's collar! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-27 03:45 am UTC (link)
	Thankyou very much ^^ (Reply to this) (Parent)

	lemondropseven 2010-07-26 03:19 pm UTC (link)
	This is awesome! I love Ron's expression, and I'd love for you to turn the drabble into something longer. I like dark fics. xD LD7 (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-07-27 03:44 am UTC (link)
	heheheh... the reason that i drew for this fest was because the fic that the drabble is an excerpt from was getting to bee too long to finish for the deadline XD once its done and posted i'll let you know. THanks bunches (Reply to this) (Parent)

	torino10154 2010-08-03 02:20 pm UTC (link)
	Such intense expressions. I love that the POV is from the side, the chain hanging down, the comparison to Lily. Well done. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	deathjunke 2010-08-09 04:20 am UTC (link)
	THank you very much g (Reply to this) (Parent)