Awww, thanks so much, snow! I'm glad this met with your expectations. My humour tends to be short and specific, so I had to find little things to put in there, like the alliteration and pajamas. My fav is "wizard up your arse - American style". This was so much fun.
Severus is very sweet in this, I hadn't realised. He does come across quite vulnerable. He's not used to being so open with himself. *hugs him and you, too*
I'm sorry for the late reply! Apparently IJ has decided to stop sending me emails when people comment on my posts. I have no idea why. It's really annoying. Either that, or my email provider is refusing to accept them. Grrrrr.