I'm just going to take a moment to gather my brain that has turned to mush... I'm in love with your coloring (especially the green and black), poses, angle and birdlike Severus who swooped in and stole Harry (who doesn't seem to be complain at all). I do like the apparent despair of Ginny whose face isn't even shown.
I *really,really* like Severus, his (bird)eyes have great eyesight and it fits literally/figuratively, because it wouldn't work with Ginny :)