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Kay_ aka_Ari ([info]kayakaari) wrote in [info]severus_sighs,
@ 2010-10-02 17:18:00

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Current mood: listless
Entry tags:drabble, event: anniversary 2010, fic, member: ari, rating: r

Title: Sigh
Author: Ari
Pairing: Severus and Lucius
Rating: R to be safe
Word Count: 400, er, sorry
Warnings: None really, sort of infidelity?
Summary: Lucius is insatiable but Severus is worthy of his desires
A/N: Thanks to Starduchess for beta-ing. I only used most of her suggestions so anything I still missed, totally my own fault!



Lucius smirked as Severus entered the staffroom. His smirk grew more lewd in response to the poorly concealed, exhausted glare his lover threw his way. Lucius was insatiable. They’d parted mere minutes ago; he could still taste the essence of the Potions Master.

Lucius remembered how it all began. They were young; Severus was very young, and it was all terribly naughty. He’d befriended the snarky but talented and clever, and even sometimes, perhaps unintentionally, witty young Slytherin from the start. He could never explain what drew him to the unattractive boy, not even after all these years.

But whatever it was, it was not sexual. No, never sexual. Until...

He’d gone to visit Severus’ room at a Future Death Eaters camp, but no one had answered his knock. Entering anyway, he startled the young man getting dressed. Or was it undressing? It didn’t matter. All Lucius could see was the impossibly impressive cock hanging between the thin, lightly hairy legs. He swallowed once to keep from drooling, twice to get some oxygen and yet again a third time for the courage to remain as dignified as a Malfoy must.

Thereafter, his dreams were occupied with fantasies of what he could do with that cock, with what such a cock could do to him. He soon found even Severus’ large nose and long fingers erotic, but he resisted the urge to deflower his young friend. Resisted, because he wouldn’t risk losing the friendship of such a talented wizard; resisted because a Malfoy would never be taken – no matter how much his spasming hole begged. He resisted until he did not, and he would never talk of how long his resistance lasted because it did not befit a Malfoy to admit such things.

The first time it happened was to be the only time. By the hundredth encounter, it was meant to last only until he married Narcissa. Yet once Draco was born, Narcissa, who’d always known, demanded it continue. She’d already done her duty. So, it did.

Lucius bit his éclair a touch too hard, the filling oozing a little out of the side of his mouth. Using his napkin as a gentleman should but not as a gentleman would, he pretended to dab at his mouth, concealing from all but his lover the way his tongue darted out to retrieve the sweet treat. Rolling his eyes, Severus merely sighed.



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[info]roozetter
2010-10-02 11:55 pm UTC (link)
Heh - I'll take a bet on how long Lucius was able to remain stoic. *snicker*

Nicely done, love!

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[info]kayakaari
2010-10-03 01:10 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I'm betting he invoked Malfoy privilege because it wasn't very long at all! lol

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[info]k8bnimble
2010-10-03 01:48 am UTC (link)
Wow - very hot. I loved all the reasons Lucius couldn't act on his desires but still did anyways since Severus was just that impressive.

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[info]kayakaari
2010-10-03 02:02 am UTC (link)
He IS pretty impressive, isn't he? And Lucius is so spoiled and indulgent...

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]joanwilder
2010-10-03 01:57 am UTC (link)
You nailed Lucius' narrative voice perfectly. I like the contrast of his resistance and his capitulation. Just lovely!

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[info]kayakaari
2010-10-03 02:02 am UTC (link)
Thanks! I did hope the Malfoy-ness came across clearly :)

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[info]accio_kilt
2010-10-03 03:21 am UTC (link)
Comeon... we all know the spoiled ponce lasted about 24 hours... maybe... Severus, after all, is quite irresistible!!!

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[info]kayakaari
2010-10-03 08:42 pm UTC (link)
LOL 24 hours!

He is quite irresistible, isn't he?

Thanks for the comment!

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[info]countesszero
2010-10-03 08:30 am UTC (link)
oh lucius you size-queen! :D

that made me happy!

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[info]kayakaari
2010-10-03 08:43 pm UTC (link)
Yay! I'm happy I made you happy!

Total size queen! lol

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[info]dreamy_dragon73
2010-10-03 09:48 pm UTC (link)
Hee, I wonder how long Lucius resisted.
I love his voice here :)

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[info]kayakaari
2010-10-04 09:59 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

It's just how Lucius sounds in my head.

Nice icon btw ;)

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[info]atypicalsnowman
2010-10-05 04:25 am UTC (link)
First of all, there's a Future Death Eaters camp?! Is it a day camp? Are there counselors? On summer nights do they paddle over to the Order camp and toilet paper the place?

: P

Second, I really like your Lucius. I think he'd have a hard time admitting his desires, even to himself. Especially to himself. You captured that very well I think.

Third, this was hot. You could cut through the desire with a knife. *pants*

Thank you so much for writing this.

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[info]starduchess
2010-10-15 07:30 am UTC (link)
Is it a day camp? Are there counselors? On summer nights do they paddle over to the Order camp and toilet paper the place?

ROTFLOL!! Great questions, snow! You know, when I first read this, a similar vague image started to show up in my head and I immediately squashed it down as too outrageous. Now we need a fic written about it!

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[info]conzieu
2010-10-05 10:14 am UTC (link)
I love it when JKR talks of Severus large nose as if it's a *bad* thing.
Yellow teeth? greasy hair? Who cares! You hardly notice them but for that nose...
Yes, one can forgive a lot because of a beautiful large *nose*.
I'd say he resisted 24 hours, just to show he could, and then decided that self denial is for the weak...
Nice drabble!!

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[info]starduchess
2010-10-15 07:36 am UTC (link)
As you probably already know, this was a wonderful look at Lucius' desires.

Good job with the re-write in paragraph one. That is much more clear now.

I really liked some of your word phrasing, like what he could do with that cock, with what such a cock could do to him and He resisted until he did not and as a gentleman should but not as a gentleman would. That's the kind of repetition that makes an impact. Nicely done!

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