Schloss Eberbach

February 19th, 2008

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February 19th, 2008

CMX Translations - So right, so wrong, so...slashy?

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MIRROR ENTRY – COMMENTS DISABLED

By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 19, 2008

Notes: I started this on the Eroicafans.org message board last February, but had to stop because of a death in the famly. I suppose it's time I started again. I was in the process of reading all the CMX translations because I didn't really sit down and do that when I got them. There are some glaring errors (to me, anyway) and some humorous and slashy bits. That is what I'd like to share, story by story. If I missed something humorous and/or slashy, let me know.

--> First off, let my say it annoys me that everyone calls Dorian “Earl” instead of “Lord Gloria” or “my lord” or “your lordship.” Okay. Moving on...

BOOK ONE
Story One

A THOUSAND KISSES


Probably the only story that conforms in any way to 'formula' manga. )

Book One - Story Two - Iron Klaus

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MIRROR ENTRY – COMMENTS DISABLED

By: Margaret Price

Posted: February 19, 2008

BOOK ONE
Story Two

IRON KLAUS



--> The Major’s superior is referred to as Director in the CMX translations, and Chief in the fan translations. I prefer the latter, and use it when referencing dialogue.

The Major makes his entrance. Let the crack begin! )


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NOTE: These are all being saved to the community's memories to make it easier to locate any one particular story.

Story Three - Achilles' Last Stand
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