I loved this story so much, but that's just because Ramjet's one of my favorites. Gotta love a guy who's main battle strategy is to crash into things...especially when sees a knight on a horseback and decides to headbutt him.
He's also responsible for the wonderful Megatron quote "I've got morons on my team!"
It's a rather different take on him that he's actually ambitious and planning to overthrow megatron in this, but the fact that his plan is so ridiculous makes up for it. It's too bad you couldn't have shown more of Ramjet's awful plan and how badly it turned out. This story illustrates one thing....everything...EVERYTHING falls to crap around Ramjet.