I like the concept of a comic book character who's AWARE that she's a comic book character. And I like the character of Savunn - she's a cutie. I do have one comment, though. It seemed to me that you may be relying a bit much on the hand/hands on hip/s pose when it comes to Savunn. She seems to strike that pose an awful lot, and really, I've hardly ever seen anybody do that for more than a few seconds. Granted, this is just the preview, so I don't know what she's doing in the rest of the comic, but I just thought I should mention it.