Man, it's like, everything's terrible. Then there's something kinda cool (the ice cream mishap, young!Dinah looking cool), that's wrapped in awful (GRIMNGRITTY OLLIE, OH NOES SHE'S AN IDIOT) with an awful interior (SEKRIT IDENITTIES, LOOK HOW YOUNG SHE IS!)
What's weird is that he writes Fringe, which a friend with excellent taste has told me is quite awesome. Maybe he's like Winick x 128?