There's some good stuff here. I really like the idea that the military in a world where aliens and demons are real do what military are supposed to do; adapt and combat them.
It's why I like the notion of UNIT in Doctor Who, where they have developed a variety of exotic weapons for dealing with aliens; armour piercing bullets for Daleks, high explosive rounds for Yetis and gold bullets for Cybermen (and shortly to add silver bullets for semi-demonic entities. Torchwood SHOULD have done the same thing, but had such ridiculous notions as facing down the Daleks with human weapons they knew from the outset wouldn't stop them, despite having access to alien weaponry.
There are some odd spelling mistakes in one page "I've plotted a fully loaded F28 Nighthawk"... no, I think you've PILOTED one. And when he picks up the magical doohickey and goes "I realised I could do nothing with this power", I think he means he could do ANYthing with this power, otherwise it's VERY anticlimactic a moment. :)