I love everything about it! But, I do think this was my favorite line:
I felt a small gleam of satisfaction that I had managed to shut him up…even for a moment…not an easy feat where Sunshine was concerned. He looked up at me with suspiciously bright eyes, and I had to force myself not to reach out to touch his image on my monitor screen.
So funny and then so sweet, snarky, yet still so very IC, cause I think there are lots of things that Brian would think, but not do. This is very representative of the entire fic!
And can I just say that the porn is fcuking scorching!!!! Just DAMN!!
And yeah, changes indeed!
I always love your stuff, but I think this is my favorite of anything you have written! Outstanding!