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Puppy Drabble Series Updated Again [Oct. 25th, 2008|03:25 pm]
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Here is the next installment in the story about Season Five and the puppy. This story begins here and links along.

Thank you to [info]xie_xie_xie (not her real name) for typing this for me finally.


Homing Instinct
By Rebel

It took me weeks to find a place, even with my mom's help. Finding somewhere that allowed dogs at all was tough. Forget something with a yard and enough light and space that I could use it as a studio.

I found a loft on my own, in a neighborhood that would have given my mother a heart attack, but they said no pets and the stairs would have been hard on the puppy, anyway. So we kept looking.

I was trying one day, for the millionth time, to think of a name for my puppy, when my phone rang.

Unspoken
By Rebel

"Hey." It was Brian, his voice silky as ever.

We'd kept seeing each other, sort of – at the diner, at Debbie's, at the comic book store. I was at Michael's one night, letting the puppy play in his yard with a neighbor's dog, when Brian stopped by.

I'd gone home with him that night, but it was hard to be at the loft with him. I don't know why; he was gentle and tender in a way he hadn't been for a long time before I moved out.

He even petted the dog, and acted like he'd missed us both.

The Morning After
By Rebel

He asked me to come over, and I did. It was like it always was: a little comforting, a little painful. In the morning, the puppy was curled up on my jeans, next to the bed. I gave his head a scratch, then turned over.

Brian looked at me. "You still haven't named him?"

I shook my head. "I can't think of the right name."

He lit a cigarette, and blew out a thin stream of smoke. "You used to be pretty good at names."

"Everything seems so banal, or just not him."

Brian laughed. "I know what you mean."

Thinking
By Rebel

I left when I took the puppy for a walk. Brian seemed surprised, or maybe not; he always hid his feelings pretty well. It was a long walk from the loft to Debbie's; I stopped and got a coffee to-go when we were around halfway there, and sat on a bench in the park, watching him play with two other dogs. I couldn't decide if I felt contented, or lonely.

My mom had called twice the night before, so I called her back.

"I have a place for you to look at," she said, sounding happy. "I'll pick you up."

The Place
By Rebel

It wasn't really a house, but almost. If it had been cuter, you might have called it a cottage or a bungalow, but it was more like a glorified shed. There was an old brick patio, uneven and broken from too many freezes and thaws. There was a fence around a small back yard, mostly mud and weeds, and a few unhappy shrubs.

The leafless trees in the yard let in more than enough light. It was just one room, not even that big, but it had a lock on the door, a place to cook, and room to paint.

Decision
By Rebel

I'd left the puppy at Debbie's, but I stood in the yard and imagined him there. I smiled.

"I thought you'd like it." My mom looked pretty happy herself; it wasn't a bad neighborhood, just a few blocks from PIFA, in fact. It was cheap and clean and I decided it was going to be mine.

"The landlord's okay with the dog?"

She nodded. "He has dogs himself, and his previous tenant here had a dog. That's who built the fence."

"Let's do it, then." We walked back to the car and went to the office to sign the lease.

Trouble
By Rebel

I'd given a pretty big piece of my Rage savings to the rental agency, so my mom bought me lunch. After she dropped me at Debbie's, I ran inside to get my puppy, thinking yet again that I really had to come up with some kind of name for him. But his crate door was open, and he wasn't inside.

I checked the yard, but he wasn't there. I noticed his leash and collar were gone, too, so I figured Debbie had taken him for a walk.

But she hadn't. She'd gone out looking for him, because he was gone.

Missing
By Rebel

"What do you mean, he got out?" I was staring at Debbie, who was holding his leash and collar in her right hand.

"He was whining, so I let him into the yard while I did the dishes. When I went out to get him, he'd dug out under the fence." She pointed to a little gap between the grass and the fence. Just big enough for a puppy to fit through.

I sat down, hard, on the kitchen chair. "Where would he go?"

"Looking for you, I guess." She sat down. "Michael and Ben are coming to help look."

Continued here...
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[User Picture]From: [info]happier_bunny
2008-10-25 05:41 pm (UTC)

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REBEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Are you trying to make me cry???????

I'm so heartbroken and worried that I can barely even remember to mention how perfectly your metaphor is working. SOBS
[User Picture]From: [info]secretsolitaire
2008-10-25 05:57 pm (UTC)

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Oh no! Just when Justin had found the perfect place, too. Woe. Looking forward to your next installment...
[User Picture]From: [info]rosy5000
2008-10-25 06:37 pm (UTC)

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Oh no!!! The poor puppy. I hope someone finds him soon.
From: [info]chering
2008-10-25 08:03 pm (UTC)

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I'll bet the puppy knows of a better place for Justin to live. This is great, Rebel!
From: [info]passing_through
2008-10-25 08:13 pm (UTC)

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Noooooooooooo! Rebel, you must fix this. Please. Pretty, pretty please.
[User Picture]From: [info]bodleian
2008-10-26 01:52 am (UTC)

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This needs to be updated quickly. Horrible things can happen to puppies when they are out by themselves. Rebel, I am depending on you.
[User Picture]From: [info]_alicesprings
2008-10-26 06:48 am (UTC)

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WTF is this??? Fix immediately kthx Rebel!
From: [info]suze_y
2008-10-26 07:34 am (UTC)

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Oh Rebel - now I'm at the edge of my seat. I know you'll make everything ok soon, though. I anxiously await your next installment.
[User Picture]From: [info]testdog65
2008-10-26 06:51 pm (UTC)

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Rebel,

I'm so very happy that you're continuing this series. I've enjoyed both of these most recent installments tremendously - even if the angst level has left me sobbing in the corner. Please fix this soon.

~Ellen
From: [info]hydrangeaceae
2008-10-29 09:21 am (UTC)

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"Everything seems so banal, or just not him."

Brian laughed. "I know what you mean."


oh, the meta, the meta, the meta!
thank you rebel, you are a very deep thinker. but also devious...how much longer must the little nameless puppy be left wandering around pittsburgh all by himself? this is v v sad.
[User Picture]From: [info]vl_redreign
2008-11-15 01:13 am (UTC)

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Ummm Rebel...THE PUPPY IS MISSING!!!!!

Update soon, kthx.
From: [info]colleen2328
2009-01-26 12:34 pm (UTC)

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I bet I can guess where he went!