testdog65 (testdog65) wrote in qaf_coffeeclub, @ 2006-04-25 20:32:00 |
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Original poster: tgray
Repost with summary this time!
Taking the advice of _alicesprings, I thought I'd post this here!
For everyone who has been asking lately about the B/J/*cough*/M story When Friendship Hurts, I could use some feedback on plot ideas. I haven't forgotten it, believe me. I have attempted to continue it many, many times and I am getting nowhere!
What I'd like are ideas on how you would like to see things play out. Of course, the obvious... Brian and Justin together. That goes without saying. But as we last left the boys, they are definitely not on the road to happily ever after. What happens to turn things around? Does anyone help? How long does it take? Weeks, months, years? A chance meeting somewhere down the road? Or are they doomed to be miserable forever? Details, people! I need details!!! Ideas? Something? This has been bugging the hell out of me! I hit a brick wall and every scenario I came up with sounds completely wrong. I'll take any advice you can give!
Thank you!
Brief story summary
Chapter 1: B/J are sharing an apartment- enter Michael the fuck-buddy
Chapter 2: Babylon- J watches B dancing/fucking and Emmett wises up to poor Sunshine's unhappiness
Chapter 3: They comne to an agreement where B will be a little more sensitive in flaunting his tricks
Chapter 4: J meets Ethan and shares dinner... comes home to a full apartment of people... finds B fucking Ethan
Chapter 5 & 6: J decides to play B's game at babylon. Brings home a trick that ends up being a horrible fuck. Enter jealous B
Chapter 7: The big make up and B tells J he would never fuck a friend
Chapter 8: B and J get very flirty at Woody's
Chapter 9: Things get a little hot on the cab ride home
Chapter 10: B & J sex! Which B immediately regrets
Chapter 11: J wakes up alone until B comes home with Michael- fight ensues
Chapter 12: Michael figures it out... B decides it's time to talk... instead finds a letter saying J is leaving