OMG!!! that was some hot sex and the ending really made me squee. i love the idea of Brian's dream life in NY, how you handled his decision to stay and the disappointment was very real. i also love the mention of Justin's Babylon debut-- he really was amazing that night.
very well handled story, i can absolutely picture the last scene in my head and i adore it! and Justin dance!flirting with some guy to get Brian's attention is absolutely fabulous :D