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notreallyme10 (notreallyme10) wrote in qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-07-12 19:23:00

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68. Drabble: Constant Craving
Title: Constant Craving
Author: simplystars
Theme: Yearning
Notes: Fluffy.

The absolute yearning of one human body for another particular body and its indifference to substitutes is one of life's major mysteries. - Iris Murdoch

Justin's body seems to have an innate awareness of Brian's proximity. If Brian is near, Justin gravitates toward him as surely as if they are two halves of a magnet. A look, a touch, one word... Justin is drawn in.

Perhaps it is a conditioned response. Brian's hands have wrung unimaginable pleasure from Justin's body, soothed with broad palms and stroked with long, sure fingers. That might explain why just watching Brian, as he plays with the tines of his fork, can make Justin's mouth water and his cock harden.

Under the table, Justin adjusts himself; Brian smirks, eyes glittering.

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	noteverything 2009-07-13 08:34 pm UTC (link)
	That's truly what makes them remarkable; it has to be Brian and Justin. Nothing else even comes close... Thank you for sharing this with fandom. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:04 am UTC (link)
	it has* to be Brian and Justin. Nothing else even comes close...* Truer words were never spoken. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	jule1122 2009-07-13 11:11 pm UTC (link)
	Great drabble, perfect ending (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:04 am UTC (link)
	Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	circadia 2009-07-13 11:41 pm UTC (link)
	:) Really lovely. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:05 am UTC (link)
	Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	outlander 2009-07-14 04:56 am UTC (link)
	It really is always there, just simmering under the surface. Or maybe not under anything. Just out there. grin. Loved the last line, perfect. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:08 am UTC (link)
	It really is always there, just simmering under the surface. Or maybe not under anything. Just out there. grin. Hee. Oh YEAH. :D It was interesting fiddling with word choice and syntax... my drabbling had been somewhat lackadaisical, so it was good practice to go back to a strict 100-word count. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	qafmaniac 2009-07-14 07:54 am UTC (link)
	I liked this!!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:08 am UTC (link)
	Yay, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) cracks up at your icon and its twin below (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	qafmaniac 2009-07-20 06:31 am UTC (link)
	looks below Ooooh,my little online Sis was here too...;D That icon is shareable if you want to have it.I made it a looong time ago for the Diner theme in qaf_icons. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:48 am UTC (link)
	Ooooh, I just might snag it. Thanks! :D (Reply to this) (Parent)

	minuet9 2009-07-14 11:03 am UTC (link)
	oh yes. Definitely. Chemistry :) Thanks (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:09 am UTC (link)
	Well, Brian did pay careful attention in chemistry class... :D Thanks for reading! (Reply to this) (Parent)

	rosy5000 2009-07-14 10:00 pm UTC (link)
	Ummm...err... yeah... I may never look at a fork the same way again. ;) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:10 am UTC (link)
	You and me both. :D Forks, math... (Reply to this) (Parent)

	fun_demented 2009-07-16 08:28 am UTC (link)
	I don't know if I've ever read anything better than this in this fandom. I absolutely love this. It is written with absolute mastery. You have total control of this story. You couldn't be more right, this couldn't be more true to life and to Brian and Justin, specifically. Thank you so very much. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:11 am UTC (link)
	Wow, I'm kind of blown away... Thanks for the kind words - I'm beyond pleased that you liked it so much. :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	fun_demented 2009-07-20 06:38 am UTC (link)
	I was blown away by this. Truly. Do you have an archive of other qaf stories you've written. Please say, yes, that you have a million stories just waiting for me to read. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:47 am UTC (link)
	Umm, alas no. These were my first for QAF - I've written Farscape and due South and some one-offs here and there in other fandoms. Sorry? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	fun_demented 2009-07-20 07:35 am UTC (link)
	Well, your fellow FS fans are quite lucky. I am lucky, too, that you decided to write QAF this once. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	ahaw9913 2009-07-16 12:56 pm UTC (link)
	If Brian is near, Justin gravitates toward him as surely as if they are two halves of a magnet. Yeah! This is EXACTLY how it is!!! Great drabble! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:14 am UTC (link)
	I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks for letting me know. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	sjmpets 2009-07-17 04:08 am UTC (link)
	i think this proves that brian is onto justin as much as justin is on to him. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-07-20 06:14 am UTC (link)
	Oh, definitely. :D They've both got visions of porn in their heads. (Reply to this) (Parent)

	notreallyme10 2009-08-10 04:24 am UTC (link)
	You really managed to capture them and the theme in very few words. Wonderful! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-08-11 01:03 am UTC (link)
	Thank you, I'm glad you think so. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	_alicesprings 2009-09-26 10:06 am UTC (link)
	I LOVE this so much! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-09-29 04:14 am UTC (link)
	Thanks very much! It makes me happy to hear so. :) (Reply to this) (Parent)

	happier_bunny 2009-10-12 03:57 am UTC (link)
	And it only works on them... Nice drabble! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	simplystars 2009-10-12 04:52 am UTC (link)
	happily mesmerized by your icon Thanks much! (Reply to this) (Parent)