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notreallyme10 ([info]notreallyme10) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-07-12 17:14:00

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Entry tags:clusterf#ck

43. Drabble: Not Contradictory, But Complementary
Title: Not Contradictory, But Complementary
Author: [info]simplystars
Theme: Opposites
Notes: Fluffy.



It is the pull of opposite poles that stretches souls. And only stretched souls make music.
Eric Hoffer




When most people look at them, they see only contrast. Tall and dark, small and blond. Younger, older, man and boy. Naive and jaded, selfish and sweet.

Brian and Justin. Different in almost every conceivable way – though they both have a cock and know how to use it. With each other, with a trick, their skills are equal and formidable.

They're aware of how they are perceived – innocent Justin, bad boy Brian. But what everyone seems to forget is that opposites attract. And when their bodies come together, the seams disappear, puzzle pieces slot into place.

They're a perfect fit.



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[info]outlander
2009-07-13 05:41 pm UTC (link)
Tall and dark, small and blond. Younger, older, man and boy. Naive and jaded, selfish and sweet.
I really like this string of opposites...
And yes, they are a perfect fit, aren't they?
*happy sigh*

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:17 am UTC (link)
I wanted to do more with the opposites theme, but ran out of time. :(

I'm glad you liked the drabble, thanks for letting me know! :)

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-07-13 08:07 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful! Beautifully written, with a rhythmic flow to it. And yes, they are a perfect fit!

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:17 am UTC (link)
Aww, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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[info]rosy5000
2009-07-14 03:34 am UTC (link)
when their bodies come together, the seams disappear, puzzle pieces slot into place.

I REALLY love that line. Fits Brian and Justin so well.

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:18 am UTC (link)
They fit together so perfectly I always think of those wooden Russian dolls that nestle inside each other... :)

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[info]bodleian
2009-07-14 03:44 am UTC (link)
The perfect fit? Exactly. Good writing.

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:19 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm happy you liked it. :)

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[info]qafmaniac
2009-07-14 12:40 pm UTC (link)
They're a perfect fit.

Wouldn't want to have it every other way! LOL
Perfect writing.I love it!

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:20 am UTC (link)
Wouldn't want to have it every other way!

Definitely not! Not when they make us so happy... :) Thanks for reading!

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[info]noteverything
2009-07-14 08:04 pm UTC (link)
Yes! *THIS* is what makes Brian and Justin good...not the perceptions, but the reality. And what a wonderful way to say it: the seams disappear, puzzle pieces slot into place.


Thank you! I love this drabble...

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:21 am UTC (link)
It really is kind of astonishing sometimes, how the people around them cling to those old perceptions... Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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[info]circadia
2009-07-14 08:45 pm UTC (link)
Nice contrasts. Perfect fit indeed :)

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:22 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you thought it worked. :)

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[info]jule1122
2009-07-14 11:59 pm UTC (link)
Excellent drabble! And the prefect touch of humor:
Different in almost every conceivable way – though they both have a cock and know how to use it.

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:22 am UTC (link)
Heh. I have no idea where that came from. Thanks for reading! :)

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[info]sjmpets
2009-07-15 03:25 am UTC (link)
very pretty. "they're a perfect fit." oh so true.

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:23 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm glad you thought it fit them. :)

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[info]minuet9
2009-07-15 09:20 am UTC (link)
perfectly said :)

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:24 am UTC (link)
Aww, thank you. I'm so pleased you liked it. :)

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[info]pfodge
2009-07-17 05:22 pm UTC (link)
Very well done.

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:25 am UTC (link)
Thanks very much - and yay, I can finally use the icon I got from you! :)

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[info]ex_4cupcakes771
2009-07-18 06:18 am UTC (link)
Yes indeed they are. :D

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:25 am UTC (link)
:)

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[info]suze_y
2009-07-18 03:17 pm UTC (link)
Simply scrumptious!!
And honestly, it's not a word that comes to mind often, but it popped up for this, so it must be the one. I loved this!!

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:26 am UTC (link)
Hmm, perhaps we should conduct a taste-test...? :D

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[info]testdog65
2009-07-20 01:40 am UTC (link)
They're a perfect fit.

Indeed! Nicely done. :)

~Ellen

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[info]simplystars
2009-07-20 05:27 am UTC (link)
Thanks, I'm so happy you liked it! And many many thanks as well for everything you mods did for this challenge. It's been a great first experience with QAF fandom. :)

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[info]testdog65
2009-07-23 01:04 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the challenge and thank you so much for participating!

~Ellen

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-07-31 02:09 am UTC (link)
They're a perfect fit.

Perfect last line :)

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[info]simplystars
2009-08-03 03:21 am UTC (link)
I'm glad you thought so! :) I really enjoyed writing for this challenge.

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[info]_alicesprings
2009-09-26 09:48 am UTC (link)
And when their bodies come together, the seams disappear, puzzle pieces slot into place.

Fabulous!

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[info]simplystars
2009-09-29 04:15 am UTC (link)
*happy sigh* They're just lovely together. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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