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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2009-03-07 10:34:00

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Entry tags:small things made large, small things phase 2

13. The Joys of Parenthood (Drabble 3)
Title: The Joys of Parenthood
Author: [info]notreallyme10
Drabble: # 3 by [info]fansee


Gus was stabbing and killing his ravioli, one by one. Mel said, "So, Gus, didn't your pre-kindergarten go on a field trip today?"

"Yep."

"Well, tell me about it."

"I awready told Mom."

"You didn't tell me."

"It was very inneresting. We saw pigs and chickens and cows. They were milking the cows." Gus put down his fork. “Jus’ like when Daddy milked Justin.”

Two sets of appalled maternal eyes stared at him.

Lindsay broke the lengthy silence. “I’m sure there’s a perfectly reasonable explanation for….” Her voice trailed off at Mel’s sardonic expression.

“Yeah? Like what? You tell me.”


The museum was torture.

Kids everywhere and every fucking one of them was crying. Kids that don't even fucking belong to me running up and putting their sticky little hands on me for no apparent reason. Every surface covered in a layer of grime that is sure to make Gus, Justin and myself sick with the fucking plague or whatever it is children and other rodents carry.

Twenty minutes in and all I could think about was a hot shower, a stiff drink and Justin's ass.

Two hours in and after Gus' third throw down drag out tantrum of the day - this one triggered by my suggestion that we should get the fuck out of this god forsaken place - and I was contemplating slitting my wrist or just abandoning Justin and cutting my losses.

Justin handled the meltdown with enviable grace for about five minutes and then gave up, threw Gus over his shoulder and headed for the nearest exit.

Gus cried himself out in the car and finally passed out. I briefly considered driving around for a while in fear he might wake when we stopped but the pull of home was too great.

He woke briefly when I lifted him out of the car seat.

"I love the museum Daddy."

He voice was so soft and sweet that it was hard to reconcile with the terror he had been not thirty minutes earlier. And then he fell right back to sleep.

He probably needed a snack and he certainly could have washed his hands, but there was no way I was going to give up the current much needed quiet.

I laid him on his bed and carefully took off his sneakers. He was dead to the world when I pulled the door closed.

Which is why it was such a surprise when he walked into our room twenty minutes later...

Justin was already finishing up in the shower when I came back from putting Gus down.

"Shower fast; I need you to fuck the shit out of me before he wakes up."

"You aren't going to get any complaints from me."

When I come into the bedroom he's already on his stomach on the bed.

"I'm ready, and I'm seriously not in the mood to wait."

I laugh, but I don't even thinking about teasing him or slowing things down. I need this as badly as he does right now.

His hole is wet with lube and it's clear he made good use of my time in the shower.

When I push in he pushes back. He wants it hard and fast and I suppose it can't hurt to take out a little aggression here since we have several more hours before Gus' moms come to pick him up.

I grab his shoulders and use them to pull him into every thrust. He's on all fours, back arched deeply, taking all I can give him. My hands move to his hips and my thrusts become shorter, sharper.

Coming inside his ass is like a release on the pressure valve. He uses his muscles to squeeze the fuck out of me and I jerk through a particularly powerful orgasm for what feels like minutes.

When I'm through I pull him upright and reach for his cock. His back is tight against my chest and he's writhing against me.

A few rough tugs are all it takes for him to come.

And that's when I hear a confused little voice.

"Daddy... what are you doing?"



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[info]michira_70
2009-03-07 02:36 pm UTC (link)
LOL, that's a priceless story.

This line: *They were milking the cows." Gus put down his fork. “Jus´ like when Daddy milked Justin.”* really cracks me up!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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[info]vl_redreign
2009-03-07 05:20 pm UTC (link)
ROTFLMFAO

Okay, you took a hysterical prompt and made a hysterical story out of it. You win.

My sides hurt.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Yay! Thanks :D

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[info]bulagirl
2009-03-07 05:31 pm UTC (link)
LOL
This was hilarious :)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]secretsolitaire
2009-03-07 07:29 pm UTC (link)
Ahahaha, fabulous!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:26 pm UTC (link)
Thanks!

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[info]firehead30
2009-03-07 08:00 pm UTC (link)
ohhhhh ohhhh ohhhh nooooo, but yes, because I know of very few parents where the kids have not interrupted the um well milking process in one form or another:-)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:28 pm UTC (link)
the um well milking process

ROFL!!! I don't have kids but I imagine this is upsetting for EVERYONE! Thanks!

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[info]jule1122
2009-03-08 08:38 am UTC (link)
Too funny. And I think every parent has had this moment:
He voice was so soft and sweet that it was hard to reconcile with the terror he had been not thirty minutes earlier. And then he fell right back to sleep.

And the sex was hot:)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:28 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I don't have kids so it is nice to hear the Gus parts worked :)

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[info]ceee
2009-03-08 04:38 pm UTC (link)
LOL that is hilarious!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:29 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]kari77
2009-03-08 05:40 pm UTC (link)
lol OK, now we need ANOTHER follow-up for this story. :D

He voice was so soft and sweet that it was hard to reconcile with the terror he had been not thirty minutes earlier. And then he fell right back to sleep.
Aww, that's sweet.

Very cute story. And the part when Gus wasn't present was so hot.

Thank you!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:31 pm UTC (link)
OK, now we need ANOTHER follow-up for this story. :D

LOL! I'm imagining a lot of yelling :) Thank you!

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[info]qafcracked
2009-03-08 06:10 pm UTC (link)
Oh my goodness. That is an awesome use of that drabble. Bravo.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:32 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I had fun with this one :)

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[info]rosy5000
2009-03-09 12:26 am UTC (link)
lol And thus... Brian and Justin learned to use a lock on their bedroom door. hehe

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:32 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Yes, a lock would be GOOD! Thanks!

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[info]ahaw9913
2009-03-09 10:49 am UTC (link)
OMG! This was so freaking funny! The entire scene at the museum is the most fantastic Snarky!Brian!!! That cracked my shit up!

And I have to admit that Brian fucking Kinney, the stud of Liberty Ave., taking off his boy's sneakers and worrying about him maybe needing a snack just melts me.

And then there's the hawt porn.

And then the moment every parent lives in fear of...LOL

This was a fantastic use of a fantastic drabble!

I would LOVE to see the rest of this played out!!! PLEASE!?!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:34 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I had such a fun time writing this one so I'm very glad you had fun reading it :)

I'm not sure I could do justice to all the yelling that would have to be in the next part. LOL!

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[info]not_yet_defined
2009-03-11 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Lmao if there were winners for the challenge I think it would be you. This whole fix was priceless.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:34 pm UTC (link)
This completely made my day! Thanks!

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[info]pendulumchanges
2009-03-11 06:23 pm UTC (link)
He woke briefly when I lifted him out of the car seat.

"I love the museum Daddy."


That is the cutest Gus moment I've ever read in a fic. So freaking adorable!!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:35 pm UTC (link)
Awww, thanks! Kind of funny that it came in this story... of all Gus stories. LOL!

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[info]morgana7266
2009-03-12 03:21 pm UTC (link)
OMG!!!!! That was priceless! Really fantastic!

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-12 05:35 pm UTC (link)
Thank you :D

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[info]outlander
2009-03-13 10:55 am UTC (link)
Laughing my ass off here.

"I love the museum Daddy."
His voice was so soft and sweet that it was hard to reconcile with the terror he had been not thirty minutes earlier. And then he fell right back to sleep.

snort. You just nailed that moment every child pulls.

A perfect continuation of the prompt. Both are hysterical.
And did I mention the smoking hot sex? Yeah. Hot.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-14 04:10 pm UTC (link)
You just nailed that moment every child pulls.

YAY! I'm so happy to hear this because I don't have kids or even really much experience with them, so I was a bit worried about the Gus stuff.

Thank you so much!

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[info]besamislabios
2009-03-13 03:02 pm UTC (link)
LMAO!!! Just picturing the look on their faces while hearing Gus cracks me up. Priceless. :D

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-14 04:10 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Thanks!

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[info]itwaslovetome
2009-03-15 10:43 am UTC (link)
This was priceless. I don't have kids, but I've worked in childcare fairly extensively, and that part was perfect.
The Brian/Gus love had me all smiley.
Then the Hot Brian/Justin Love had me all melting.
And the end was just hysterical.
So perfect for the drabble - and so many emotions done JUST right. :)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-16 09:50 am UTC (link)
Yay! I'm so excited to have gotten this one right :) Writing kids is just... hard! LOL! Thank you!

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[info]happier_bunny
2009-03-15 11:48 am UTC (link)
BWAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

Ok, you win! Too brilliant.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-16 09:51 am UTC (link)
Why thank you :D

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[info]noteverything
2009-03-18 09:15 am UTC (link)
It's amazing to me that you don't have kids or at least spend lots of time with them. I think you wrote Gus perfectly.

Poor kid...he had to be totally confused when he saw Brian "milking" Justin.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-18 04:47 pm UTC (link)
THANK YOU! I do have a niece... but in general I'm not much of a kid person so I was a little worried. But I just had to write for this drabble :)

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[info]bellaaurora
2009-03-23 03:16 am UTC (link)
Hilarious! Poor Brian.

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-03-24 10:21 am UTC (link)
Thank you :)

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(Anonymous)
2009-12-06 08:21 pm UTC (link)
omg, I nearly chocked - I was laughing so hard, holy shit XD

LumCheng~

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-12-18 02:01 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]girloftheburbs
2009-12-07 01:20 am UTC (link)
Holy crap! This was hilarious, and captured the kiddy behavior very well. :) What a terrifying moment to be walked in on, OMG... I walked in on my parents once, and I've never forgotten the feeling of horror. (LOL!!)

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[info]notreallyme10
2009-12-18 02:01 am UTC (link)
Sorry I'm a little behind on responding!!!

I walked in on my parents once, and I've never forgotten the feeling of horror.

LOL! That is terrible!

I'm glad you had fun with this even with the bad memories it brought up for you ;)

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[info]girloftheburbs
2009-12-21 10:08 am UTC (link)
LOL! Well, now I can laugh about it, I was a teenager at the time and they didn't see me (thank god), so it's just like a bad dream. ;) I cracked up about the explanation that Gus was given; it sounds like it was Brian. :) This is a classic. <3

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