Out of everything you said, hearing that it was sucessfully funny, is what I liked the most. It's so hard to write humor and when it works, it's such a high.
What amazed me through out this story is how your references back to canon where never in your face but woven into the fabric of the narrative perfectly. They just fit.
What's more amazing, is that I never consciously thought about the canon references, just threw them in as I rushed forward, typing. How cool that they fit like that.
They just fit, like Emmett and Justin as litter mates.
OMG, do you know how much I love these two as litter mates? So much. I told Claudia I'm wanting to do their backstory now.
The "more than once" references were perfect.
Ah. You caught that. :)
Thank you, Fire, for everything. For your support, guidance, and feedback. But most of all, for how much you care about me and the fics i write. ♥