Yay for every damn thing! Thank you, Claudia, for loving it so much and for reccing it so beautifully. The line you liked most was the only line in the whole fic that was written without regard to furthering the narrative, and to which I gave the most time. You're like the hawk with the prize yourself. :)
Just this week, I've thought about writing Justin/Emmett's backstory - their first meeting, their first time, the forging of their friendship. Now that I have a universe in which to set them, it seems much easier.
Finally, in rereading your feedback today, I had a thought. Justin's blue lights are natural, not manmade. I knew this as I wrote, but because I was writing so fast, all the implications of this were never fully appreciated and explored. I will now go off to think about this.