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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2008-05-17 02:06:00

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Entry tags:challenge in two parts

Graphic Number 14: "Invitation"
Title: Invitation
Author: by [info]notreallyme10
Timeline: Post 513
Rating: nc-17
Graphic: # 14 [info]cam_a




I can't stop staring at it. It's just so perfectly him. I offered to help him with it, but now that I have it in my hands I couldn't be happier that he turned me down. It wouldn't have been any better for my help, but it would have been less him.

I haven't seen the pieces for the show yet and this feels almost like a tease. Bold graphics with his loose, expressive style of painting... a hint of the bigger picture. Not enough to give anything away, just enough to draw me in.

But it's impossible not to focus on the picture of him. I don't get to lay my eyes on him nearly enough right now.

It's really just a glimpse, eyes down, slightly hidden behind his work. An even bigger tease. He's in black and white, but I know how red his lips are and it makes me want them wrapped around my cock.

It shouldn't be enough, but looking at it makes me hard.

I don't bother taking the time to get naked. But once I have my dick in my hand, I slow down to enjoy it.

I can see him.

Painting in his studio. Shirt off, little smears of paint across his chest and completely engrossed in what he is creating.

Biting his bottom lip before casting his eyes down in a flirtatious show of submission to the photographer. And then later, fucking the photographer up against the wall.

Greeting friends, family and complete strangers with that huge fucking smile. Waiting, hoping to hear that they all think he is as talented as he knows he is.

Me, kissing him. Sucking on his lower lip until it's swollen and raw. And then letting him suck my cock, slow and perfect. Until my back bows away from the bed and I fill his mouth.

I lick my come from my fingers because if he was here he would slide his come covered tongue into my mouth and feed it to me.

But my mind doesn't stop when I come and I spend a few minutes thinking about what happens after the show is over. When he comes home for a few weeks to rest and catch up with everyone. And to get fucked properly in a comfortable bed. He's worked hard for this and he's looking forward to the break. I am too.



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[info]gmta_nz
2008-05-17 04:50 am UTC (link)
I like this a lot. Well done!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:50 pm UTC
Invitation
[info]maybe742
2008-05-17 05:17 am UTC (link)
Typically Brian :)

Thanks for this wonderful ficlet.

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Re: Invitation - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:50 pm UTC

[info]happier_bunny
2008-05-17 07:54 am UTC (link)
Oh yummy! Clever take on the graphic - which was very creative itself!

Excellent job to author and artist. :)

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:51 pm UTC

[info]outlander
2008-05-17 09:27 am UTC (link)
I can't stop staring at it. It's just so perfectly him. I offered to help him with it, but now that I have it in my hands I couldn't be happier that he turned me down.
Perfect opening lines. I thought the banner was amazingly creative when I first saw it and only love it more now, paired with a proud & pondering Brian.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:52 pm UTC

[info]pye_wacket
2008-05-17 09:43 am UTC (link)
Me, kissing him. Sucking on his lower lip until it's swollen and raw

I lick my come from my fingers because if he was here he would slide his come covered tongue into my mouth and feed it to me.


OMG!!! this is pretty hot!!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:52 pm UTC

[info]secretsolitaire
2008-05-17 12:43 pm UTC (link)
Very sexy. Brian totally gets off on artist!Justin. ;-)

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:53 pm UTC

[info]testdog65
2008-05-17 03:43 pm UTC (link)
Excellent interpretation of a superb graphic!

Two of my favorite lines:

It wouldn't have been any better for my help, but it would have been less him.

I haven't seen the pieces for the show yet and this feels almost like a tease.

Hot and well crafted at the same time. I really enjoyed this!

~Ellen

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:56 pm UTC

[info]vl_redreign
2008-05-17 06:26 pm UTC (link)
The tone of this is very familiar. Not gonna guess, though.

I love the idea of Brian reacting to the notice. I expected a story about the show itself, this was a very welcome surprise.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:57 pm UTC

[info]firehead30
2008-05-17 11:07 pm UTC (link)
Excellent inner Brian voice. His pride in Justin, respect for his art and career, the fact that he misses Justin, and that he knows him: how he paints, what he thinks and what he wants. Lovely work.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:58 pm UTC

[info]besamislabios
2008-05-18 07:09 am UTC (link)
I loved this, Brian thinking about Justin and missing Justin and getting off while doing that. :)

Thank you for this wonderful ficlet. :D

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 04:58 pm UTC

[info]hannasch
2008-05-18 08:22 am UTC (link)
Thank You. Somehow That is exactly the way I always inagined it would be between them after J. leaves for New York. You leave so much room for my imagination - lovely. Couldn't You write some more stories based on the assumptions that you set for this ficlet, please?

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:02 pm UTC

[info]minuet9
2008-05-18 09:42 am UTC (link)
Both graphic and story are inspired :)
Very nice picture of the future :)
I love Brian thinking about After the show ;)
Thank you both :)

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:08 pm UTC

[info]singlewoman
2008-05-18 10:29 am UTC (link)
I loved the graphic and this fic goes perfectly with it. Brian's anticipation is palpable.

I haven't seen the pieces for the show yet and this feels almost like a tease. Great line.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:12 pm UTC

[info]vamphile
2008-05-18 10:45 am UTC (link)
It's entirely Brian's POV, and we never even hear from Justin, and yet, it's all ABOUT justin, and Teh Love, and i like that... love that even.

I've realized that i have this odd kink, in fic, for them to be apart physically, and together in ways that really only they know... it's jsut... you hit that kink, and did it well. thank you.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:20 pm UTC
The Invitiation
(Anonymous)
2008-05-18 09:17 pm UTC (link)
I don't think any invitation I ever sent out had that kind of reception! FanSee

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Re: The Invitiation - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:21 pm UTC

[info]jule1122
2008-05-19 07:31 pm UTC (link)
Very hot, but what I really love are Brian's thoughts when he first sees the invitation.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:21 pm UTC

[info]flashfly
2008-05-20 12:02 am UTC (link)
So loved this: Biting his bottom lip before casting his eyes down in a flirtatious show of submission to the photographer. And then later, fucking the photographer up against the wall.

But then again, I loved the whole thing.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:22 pm UTC

[info]noteverything
2008-05-20 03:49 pm UTC (link)
Damn! Such a hot little fic and Brian's only jerking off. Oh the power of Justin...

This was a fun little read. Thanks for sharing it!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:22 pm UTC

[info]not_yet_defined
2008-05-20 05:23 pm UTC (link)
nice hot little ficlet. :D i love that looking at this turns brian on. this is just good. yeah.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:28 pm UTC

[info]rosy5000
2008-05-20 09:10 pm UTC (link)
That would absolutely be Brian's reaction to an invitation like that. ;) Very hot. :)

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:29 pm UTC

[info]kata_ny
2008-05-21 03:24 am UTC (link)
i love to see Brian thinking about Justin while he is painting.so hot and powerful!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:29 pm UTC

[info]herefordroad
2008-05-21 09:44 pm UTC (link)
i love brian's thoughts here...it's enough to draw me in, too:

"I haven't seen the pieces for the show yet and this feels almost like a tease. Bold graphics with his loose, expressive style of painting... a hint of the bigger picture. Not enough to give anything away, just enough to draw me in."

and i just noticed that the suite number on the fantastic graphic is 308...is that a happy accident?

jeannie

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:32 pm UTC

[info]brianslave68
2008-05-21 10:47 pm UTC (link)
I'm a real sucker when it comes to Brian's private thoughts. I love reading what he's thinking and feeling. And OMG, he jerked off! hehe

Very unique take on the graphic.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:33 pm UTC

[info]cam_a
2008-05-22 03:07 pm UTC (link)
Jesus!!! *fans self* That was pretty damn hot. I am so thrilled my graphic inspired this. Thank you!!!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:34 pm UTC

[info]opal11
2008-05-22 08:25 pm UTC (link)
this graphic fit is perfect for this story.. i really enjoyed it..well done

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:34 am UTC

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