Your graphic is brilliant and I was immediately drawn to it because it is so powerful and, the way I interpreted it, quite dark and, yes, surreal. I usually write in this kind of free-flow style so I thought that might fit.
I was worried that I wouldn't be able to come up to your expectations, therefore, I'm relieved you like the fic a little bit. I see that your idea of the bee was much more positive than mine, but I hope I didn't take it all too far from what you wanted to express.
I might cross-post the fic over at LJ, would you mind if I used a copy of your graphic, or would you rather I link it to IJ?