Bravo! I so didn't want this to end. I printed the fic out this morning so I could take it with me and read it throughout the day. 19 pages is too short!
I loved everything about it - the structure, the backstories, the first kiss in the fog (yum!), the reference to Justin's claws, how he ordered beer and soup (aww! I want to feed him steak and potatoes), how smart he was at poker, how careful and attentive Brian was as a lover, Lindsay and her maid! (double yum), Brian's quicksand, Emmett emulating Godiva, how careful Justin was with his money (aww! I want to feed him lobster and champagne), how impeccably clean Justin was, am I leaving something out?, yes, I know, this sentence: I can honestly say it both hurts the most and feels the best.