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xie_xie_xie ([info]xie_xie_xie) wrote in [info]qaf_challenges,
@ 2008-05-17 00:49:00

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Entry tags:challenge in two parts

Graphic Number 6: "Apart"
Title: Apart
Author: [info]notreallyme10
Timeline: Post 513
Rating: nc-17
Graphic: # 6 by [info]youbetterwiseup




Apart...

It isn't a question of making it work. I know that we can do it. I just don't want to.

But I do what I have to and so does he.

And we make the best of it.

And Together...

His hair is longer than the last time I saw him and so fucking soft it's obscene. I use it to hold him down. The harder I grip, the louder he moans. I pull and his ass squeezes my orgasm right out of me.

He's bucking against me, begging to come. So close and waiting for me to let him have it. When I take control like this he gives himself over completely.

And Together...

He hits a rough spot financially and I go to New York to convince him to let me help.

I use my fingers and tongue and cock in an attempt to coerce him, but he's a stubborn asshole. He wants to do it on his own, prove to himself and everyone else that he can.

In the end I just have to remind him that we're partners and this is what we do for each other.

And Together...

There are lines of come streaked across his stomach. The last few drops slide over the head of his dick and fall just below his navel.

He looks really good like this. Chest heaving from the exertion, body covered in a sheen of sweat, dick half hard - not sure if we're done yet. But most of all, he looks unbelievably hot with come dripping from his pale skin.

One drip somehow landed on his hip bone and that's the spot I suck clean first.

And Together...

Everything comes down on me at once. We lose a huge client at Kinnetik, Gus is in trouble at school and Mikey's pissed at me about some asshole comment I made.

Just when I'm about to lose myself in a bottle of Beam he shows up and suggests I get lost in his ass instead.

And then before he goes back home he smooths things over with Mikey, reminds me that all kids get in trouble at school and tells me to get my ass in gear and get out and find two bigger clients for Kinnetik to replace the one I lost.

And Together...

We haven't seen each other in a few months and we've been up all night fucking. He's half asleep, but I'm not done with him yet.

He looks fucking beautiful all fucked out and exhausted. I spoon up close behind him, letting my cock settle in between his thighs. I fuck him slowly like that and right when the rough friction of strong muscles and leg hairs is threatening to become uncomfortable or make me come, he tells me to stop fucking around and fuck him already.

And Together

Living together in a home that is ours is different. Being in the same city together for more than a few days is a relief. Not having to wait months for a good blow job is really fucking good. Fucking raw is better than all the rest of it put together.

We're not married, but we're together and that's good enough. It's what works for us. And when I'm coming in his ass without a condom in the way, it seems to me that it is more than working.



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[info]secretsolitaire
2008-05-17 10:54 am UTC (link)
Amazing little vignettes, and a great use of the art! My favorite line:

One drip somehow landed on his hip bone and that's the spot I suck clean first.

Mmmm.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:54 pm UTC

[info]cindybaby
2008-05-17 02:39 pm UTC (link)
Very unique.

I liked it.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:55 pm UTC

[info]brianslave68
2008-05-17 03:10 pm UTC (link)
The concept of this fic is wonderful. I love the little snippets of of their life together and it works really well with the banner. Great job!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 05:56 pm UTC

[info]flamencanyc
2008-05-17 08:03 pm UTC (link)
Amazing the use of the image text as the basis for a uniquely styled and well-written fic. The snippets of how they work together in daily life and in bed interwoven works beautifully. Lovely job. Thanks!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-22 06:00 pm UTC

[info]herefordroad
2008-05-18 11:03 am UTC (link)
excellent use of the graphic...clever, angsty, and full of promise.

i love brian's thoughts and this is my favorite:

"Fucking raw is better than all the rest of it put together."

jeannie

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 09:58 am UTC

[info]jule1122
2008-05-18 12:43 pm UTC (link)
Stunning! Every word of this is perfect. I'm just in awe.

His hair is longer than the last time I saw him and so fucking soft it's obscene. I use it to hold him down. The harder I grip, the louder he moans. I pull and his ass squeezes my orgasm right out of me.
and
In the end I just have to remind him that we're partners and this is what we do for each other
and
He looks fucking beautiful all fucked out and exhausted. I spoon up close behind him, letting my cock settle in between his thighs. I fuck him slowly like that
and I can't forget
Living together in a home that is ours is different. Being in the same city together for more than a few days is a relief. Not having to wait months for a good blow job is really fucking good. Fucking raw is better than all the rest of it put together.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 09:58 am UTC

[info]singlewoman
2008-05-18 02:48 pm UTC (link)
I love the progression of their lives together. Seeing that each of them needs help and the other is there.

Wonderfully done and a great user of the graphic.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 09:59 am UTC

[info]happier_bunny
2008-05-18 03:03 pm UTC (link)
OH god, this was hot and very unique. I love how you matched the hotness of the graphic to your story. Just aaaamazing. :)

Cheers to you both!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:00 am UTC

[info]noteverything
2008-05-18 04:18 pm UTC (link)
Excellent concept using the text of the graphic. I can't imagine a better idea.

And you pack a lot of hotness in just a few words in this one:
There are lines of come streaked across his stomach. The last few drops slide over the head of his dick and fall just below his navel.

He looks really good like this. Chest heaving from the exertion, body covered in a sheen of sweat, dick half hard - not sure if we're done yet. But most of all, he looks unbelievably hot with come dripping from his pale skin.

One drip somehow landed on his hip bone and that's the spot I suck clean first.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:03 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]noteverything, 2008-05-24 10:43 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-24 10:57 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]noteverything, 2008-05-24 02:49 pm UTC

[info]flashfly
2008-05-18 09:11 pm UTC (link)
A really inspired interpretation of the graphic. Great mix of heat and slice of life. I liked the hair pulling. A lot.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:04 am UTC

[info]passing_through
2008-05-19 06:10 pm UTC (link)
Beautifully done and a perfect interpretation of the graphic. Loved it!

YAY for hair!porn :)

Living together in a home that is ours is different. Being in the same city together for more than a few days is a relief. Not having to wait months for a good blow job is really fucking good. Fucking raw is better than all the rest of it put together.

♥

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:04 am UTC

[info]testdog65
2008-05-19 08:50 pm UTC (link)
I really enjoyed reading this - like little pieces of their lives as they found a way to make things work regardless of location - and they did so in a very Brian and Justin way. Hot and happy and filled with love, support and inevitability. Nicely done!

~Ellen

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:06 am UTC

[info]snowmore
2008-05-19 09:07 pm UTC (link)
Sublime!

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:07 am UTC

[info]rosy5000
2008-05-19 09:08 pm UTC (link)
As much as I love thinking that Brian and Justin would no problems post-513, this is more likely what would happen. I love that they are there for each other, when they need it most though. And the ending made me extremely happy. :D

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:16 am UTC
Apart
(Anonymous)
2008-05-19 09:45 pm UTC (link)
So good. This is one of my favorites. I love how each of the vignettes builds towards "And Together." There is some lovely language here, too. FanSee

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Re: Apart - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:17 am UTC

[info]besamislabios
2008-05-20 02:42 pm UTC (link)
I like very much how you wrote this and how it fits the graphic, I loved the hairporn:

His hair is longer than the last time I saw him and so fucking soft it's obscene. I use it to hold him down. The harder I grip, the louder he moans.

Thank you for writing. &hearts

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:19 am UTC

[info]kata_ny
2008-05-20 03:57 pm UTC (link)

We're not married, but we're together and that's good enough. It's what works for us. And when I'm coming in his ass without a condom in the way, it seems to me that it is more than working.
they are just perfect together.end of story.so is this fic,just perfect!
:D

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:20 am UTC

[info]qafcracked
2008-05-20 04:01 pm UTC (link)
Hot and amazing and just plain lovely.

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:20 am UTC

[info]nyxa
2008-05-20 06:17 pm UTC (link)
Really loved this. So well done and such a great use of the graphic. Love and hotness and working together and being together and so much conveyed in these little snippets. Perfect. &hearts

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:21 am UTC

[info]minuet9
2008-05-21 03:40 am UTC (link)
Oooh yes, brilliant to go with a brilliant graphic.
Loved the progression of time in so few words and yet you gave a very complete picture of life. Thank you

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:22 am UTC

[info]not_yet_defined
2008-05-21 06:01 pm UTC (link)
i think i might hate whoever wrote this.

i don't know what else to say. I think this is completely awesome. i hate to pick a favorite, but i think this is my favorite marriage of a fic and a graphic in this challenge. you kicked ass on this one. and all my words to express why i dig this so much seem to be utterly failing me.

so few words, yet a complete and totally fulfilling post series fic. it has EVERYTHING in it, christ.

um, maybe i'll try this again later, hee.

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(no subject) - [info]not_yet_defined, 2008-05-22 05:56 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:26 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2008-05-21 09:08 pm UTC (link)
Brian realizes that they are better together than apart and that being with Justin is what makes everyone (including him better) loved the story

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:26 am UTC

[info]qafmaniac
2008-05-22 02:05 pm UTC (link)
The ending of this fic made me extremely happy!
Thank you! :)

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:26 am UTC

[info]pretty_words224
2008-05-23 03:08 am UTC (link)
this fits the graphic so wonderfully! My favorite part is this:

And then before he goes back home he smooths things over with Mikey, reminds me that all kids get in trouble at school and tells me to get my ass in gear and get out and find two bigger clients for Kinnetik to replace the one I lost.

*sigh* it's such a wonderful look at how supportive they are of each other. And of course the raw aspect=hot

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:31 am UTC

[info]sexy_pumpkin
2008-05-23 06:50 am UTC (link)
Just wonderful, a look at their lives together, after 513, they made it work, & raw as well, so glad I came across & found your fics, I love them,,great job as always,,Jxx

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(no subject) - [info]notreallyme10, 2008-05-23 10:32 am UTC

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